The Tourists. M(teen)/f

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[Bobascher]

Fun twist with the moms! I can’t wait to see where that leads!

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I'm thinking it might not lead where your hoping. Sorry.

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[Ghostwriter44]

Man, these short glimpses at the much crueler owners (like the ones in the bathroom in this chapter) make me reeeeeally hope someone who’s as dedicated and imaginative as you would write a spin off of one of those characters

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[Sumcoolguy]

I found you story 3 days ago and proceeded to read this great story for the next 3 days straight! I really like the dynamic relationship between Karla, Mikey, and Chrissy. They change and 'grow' as the story goes on till they have loving boyfriend, girlfriend, pet relationship. I would really like to see more of these 3 in normal everyday life. Great story thank you for writing it.

[HHunter1]

I'm glad you liked it. I really appreciate the compliment. I get the greatest rush knowing I brought some enjoyment into a persons life. I do have some chapters that continue the story. But no one else has noted an interest here, so I can't subject them to what only one is interested in. If I'm wrong, I hope people will let me know. I like sharing if people who are interested.

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[Jheidbr1]

We would all love to read a continuation of “The Tourists”
One of the best storylines I’ve seen! And the spin-off story “Another Guest” is fantastic also. Really makes you feel like Michaels shrunken are very lucky.

[HHunter1]

Thank you. Sorry for the late response. I'll look at editing them since Sumcoolguy and you (Jheidbr1) have both asked. I likely will only add chapters here and there as working both stories at once might be a bit much on me. (For some reason my work only pays me when I go there. Strange?)
Mainly though, I'm glad people are entertained. Wish I had more ability to do more. Hope to see you guys sharing your own worlds on here too someday.

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[parasai]

Had to make an account just to say this (and your other works) are my favorite on this site. Coming across a SW like Karla who eventually embraces her new role is refreshing. Her develop was fun all on it’s own, like the battles she had with herself between morality and reality throughout the story.

Micheal is also refreshing. He’s gentle but dominant, getting what he wants with the simple “treats over punishments” advice he was given. They both love and reward each other in a way only a Shrunken and owner can. Karla and Josie are very lucky Shrunken and I wish more were like him. Then again, he wouldn’t be as special.

Speaking of, I’m super curious as to how Chris is getting along with his Shrunken, the one he was training to be like Karla? The brief moments that do show them were funny yet made me want to know so much more as to how Micheal and Karla influenced him. For now, I’m just happy he found good company.

Sorry for the essay, but this is a story I enjoy no matter how many times I read it. I look forward to anything you put out.

Cheers! ^^)/

[HHunter1]

Thank you so much for such kind praise. As a writer that constantly questions his skills, it is so reassuring to know people are enjoying my work. I do enjoy writing the relationship between Karla, Micheal, and Josie. There are dynamics to it that I feel has potential for expiration. And I hope those expirations continue to entertain you.

I honestly hadn't put much thought into Chris' training of Umiko. I know she appears in a later chapter where they have gotten together online to play Battle Jumpers. But I don't think I wrote much of her. Your question makes me wonder if I should write a side chapter on the different Friend character's day lives. I never considered that, focusing on Karla since it is her story after all. But people will have to let me know if asides with Chrissy, Chris, and Sandy would be of interest.

Shame filled plug: A good way to support more of my works if you have a few extra dollars to spare is to go to my Buy me a coffee page, link below. Even little donations does help me, and almost as much as positive comments, encourage me to keep writing. Sorry for the ad.

Thank you again for your encouragement, and it wasn't an essay. Have you notice the length of some of my chapters?