The Tourists: Another Guest

[HHunter1]

Thank you for your comment. I honestly lack the confidence to accept people are reading just from the number of views increasing. Hearing people are enjoying and not just clicking on it by accident helps my fragile ego so much. Sorry if I was a bother.

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[Ghostwriter44]

Lol no worries! I was the same way when I was writing/posting stories too lol. Comments go a long way when it comes to motivation

And I gotta say as much as I love the couples play since it adds such a new fresh dynamic to this story (F/f is great too), I absolutely LOVE the scenes/chapters where Trevor is by himself playing with his shrunken harem (like this last chapter). They’re by far the parts I reread the most lol (again, not saying they’re the only parts I like). Loving this as a whole tho!! You’re amazing at world building/character building

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I understand wanting to see Trevor play evil master. Making his pets service him or working them for his own pleasure. Oddly I think it's the mind set I have for him that makes me write those scenes less. He sees them as objects that happen to be alive more then Living being he can use like objects.
So, in his mind it would be like picking between sex with a gorgeous woman that likes toys included over getting himself off with some toys.
Don't worry though, there will be more playing with his toy scenes. I really like them myself.

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[Ghostwriter44]

Man, I cannot wait to see Trevor’s more “extreme experiments” as was teased in this chapter. Loving this so much!

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I'm glad your enjoying. Nice knowing your looking forward to those. Now, what those will be, to be honest, I haven't thought up yet. Guess I should focus less on the humans.

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[Ghostwriter44]

Lol no pressure I can patiently wait for its time to come lol. Just hope they get decently violent and that not everyone survives them hahah. Would be nice if the keepers get to witness a few of them as well lol

Also, even tho I solely read these stories for the fetish side, you are absolutely amazing at world building and building characters/scenarios!

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I have been a little more homicidal in this story's chapters. And Trevor isn't the type to turn over passable for Ship Credit. He likes the rush too much. Many Shrunken have did to get to this point already. As for the Keepers made to watch, to learn only their looks and obedience keeps them alive. You know, maybe.

Thanks. I know I'm not a great story writer/self editor, but I try. I really grateful that you and others enjoy. I want the world that both Karla and Micheal reside in as well as Trevor and company to feel like the same world. But from different perspectives. Also, Shrunken treatment is supposed to be the main focus. That they have events and situations that are outside of that. To show character as well as what is out in the world or how it works.

It's funny I wrote the first chapter of the Tourist figuring no one would pay it much attention. That I would share it and there it would end. So I just wrote it allowing some things to be there without much thought of why or as a self amusing whim. Now, I have a world. One people enjoy and even someone is adding too (Thanks Underscore). Thank you all for your support.

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[Bobmn]

Literally just made an account just to say this, but I think I am out, like the reason I keep coming back is because i was genuine interested in the cici/trevor side of the story. Not to be mean or anything thing like your stories are really good, it just felt out of place having cici and jewel shrunken out of nowhere and then trevor acting like he always hated them. Like to me the two sisters was the best part of the story.

Also wouldn't the company know that crystal was lying? And Trevor who was loving every second with cici now views her as nothing but a less then toy? And then what happened to the actual people who stoled the collection or was crystal lying about that to? Or did the company punish both groups of cici jewel and the servents?

I don't I think this where I leave, wish you the best in completing this story and to the readers hope you enjoy (now to figure out how to delete my account and go back to lurking)

[Ghostwriter44]

I just wanna say that Cici/Jewel being shrunk came as a huge surprise and I wasn’t sure if I was gonna like it, including how Trevor was treating them. But there’s honestly something really hot about it all and I ended up really enjoying it all. Glad to see Trevor finally accepting the Walker life a little more lol. Can’t wait for the next one!

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Well, I'm sorry I disappointed you.

As for Crystal's scheme. I guess I didn't explain in well enough in the chapter. I know I meant to add they found Katie's room key in the Gao's room with the Shrunken, but it must have slipped my mind while writing. But Calvin had access the Security systems and hid the signals from the sisters and disguised the servant's signals as them. So for Security, all the evidence they have looks like Jewel and Ci-Ci stole they Shrunken. Perhaps I should relook at the expiration in chapter and try to write that clearer. Now do Security have suspicion Crystal played them? Possibly, but they don't have evidence to investigate that idea.

Now, yes Jewel and Ci-Ci are innocent of that crime. Jewel's search history showed she had been looking on black-market Shrunken selling sights. (A big Company no no.) And when they were Processed (A mental procedure that can determine guilt, willingness to commit a certain crime, and even loyalty among other aspects) the sisters not only showed a willingness to commit that type of crime, but a want to profit from that type of act outside the Company. As well as a lack of loyalty to the Company.

Now was Crystal trying to get them shrunk? Technically no. She figured the Processing would have showed them Company loyalists. With Computer data and Processing data conflicting they would have been sent home early to make sure nothing else connected to them could happen. But that wasn't what happened.

Now, why was Trevor so quick to go from falling for Ci-Ci to enjoy lording over Ci-Ci. That one is, well, I am kind of writing the characters with the same mindset. Shrunken are not people. The example I'm using I'm sad to say is how Nazi German's during WWII view Jews. But changing the extermination with enjoyment. It's why no one on the ship is feeling the least bit guilty at collecting entire towns populations. Once Ci-Ci and Jewel were shown to Trevor as Shrunken they stopped being romantic interests and became things, living toys. It would be like a loyal Nazi solider in1943 finding out the girl he had been seeing was secretly a Jew.

This plot was to show two things. How far Crystal would go to win. And how Company members view anyone that becomes a Shrunken. I'm sorry if that has caused you to lose interest. Hope you enjoy lurking.

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Ghostwriter44, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hope I can get the next one finished for Thursday.

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[ALittleConfused]

Loved the new chapter. I really enjoy seeing Crystal dominate Cici and Jewel.

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I'm glad you enjoyed that. Hope others did as well.

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