The Tourists. Home Life

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[polkqwerty]

Hey so, I'm not so sure if this comes off as mean when I don't mean it to as you seem like a talented writer but

Could you like, indicate in (at least) chapter tags where some really cruel or violent stuff happens and maybe hint at what happens? I've seen in your work small moments of stuff I come to this section for, but there's so much by volume that's just... size maledom/femdom mostly softer play here or just normal scene stuff where i just... more or less give up on this story as a whole because I'm not finding any of the very dark stuff I come to the 'V'sw area for. Conversely it feels so sparse in that darkness that you could soften or skip those parts in an edited version and get more attention in the non V sections of this message board...

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It doesn't come across mean. And I understand your point. For me it's an ideology thing. I feel forced physical contact, especially for a sexual reason, is violent. And as the Shrunken are often forced into physical contact for the human's sexual pleasure against their will, to me that's an act of violence. Thank you for your input, I'll try to note harsher violent acts in later chapters.

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[ALittleConfused]

That was great! Really happy to see more Home Life.

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I'm glad you enjoyed. I haven't abandoned Karla's or Trevor's stories, just branched out a bit with others. I'll try to add a chapter of something each week, I just don't have enough of other things done to make them scheduled. Maybe if I hit some short of slow week at work combined with an inspiration boom I could get a few chapters ahead in things I might try that for a while. Just not likely any time soon.

As a reminder, anyone interested can support me at the link below. Also, good place to ask questions or comments. Thank you.

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[ALittleConfused]

Absolutely amazing chapters. I was hoping for something like this. Thank you! I really loved Karla's inner struggle in these chapters.

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Glad your enjoying. She is a little divided between pushing for the right thing and her own personal enjoyment.

[ralgar]

So this is an very interesting story u have going here. I like it alot, though my personal prefernce would micheal being michell instead (F/f). The juxtopisition going on in the Millers house where u have other wise seeming decent people being ok with kidnapping, torture, rape, pedophilia, slavery, and so on so forth is very interesting.

Then there is Kayla who has been massively indocternated, I like her but at the same time i want this hole company to burn and everyone invovled die a very ugly death, even the ( or especilly the decent ones). I like this story but ugh the total hipocrasy in these people, they are monsters through and through.

THere supposed justification for doing this is utter bs, and just that justification, only a handfull get decent lives most are better off dead.

Now having said all that , any chance for some toilet play ( jsut asking no its not for everyong,) so yea that. ALso any chance of Milly really playing with Kayla and Josie, and maybe decide to just take them from MIcheal, personal preference, I would so love to see them be played with by Milly instead.

Inconclusion this is a story i find very hard to enjoy because the Main family is so freaking decent, that it almost alwasy through me for a loop when i see them being casually cruel to shrunken.

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Well, in a way your suppose to hate and like them. That their niceness is so clear yet they are so unflinchingly cruel to those under their power. Those not part of their higher order are to be used and disposed of at their whim. This in fact is because much of the bigger world is taken from myself trying to figure out how the people in Nazi Germany could treat the Jews and others so cruelly. I had watched a documentary once where they had interviews with people and they explained how in their minds that those people were somehow not people. There was even a camp guard who explained that day in and day out he felt pride at what in his mind was akin to ridding the world of a plague. Then months later after the war was over he was taken back to the camp with the people of his village and he suddenly realized, no those were just helpless people. At the time of the interview he said he never got a full nights sleep after that. Each night he would awaken from a nightmare where he was a guard in that camp once again. The man was balling in his confessed explanation and that stuck in my head. So now you know where the Millers and others in the Company's mindset sort of comes from. Hope that doesn't ruin it more on you.

As for Milly playing with Karla and/or Josie. Not likely any time soon. She defiantly won't be taking them away from Micheal as she likes how they help him grow. I do plan on some F/f some point later.

As for toilet stuff. Not likely in this one. Even with the lesser cared for Shrunken. I do a little in The Tourist: The Other Guest. But no scat, just not into that. (Really need to work more on that one soon.)

Hope that answers your questions,
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[ralgar]

Well I do like this chapter of the girls just hanging and actually chatting with the shrunken, I do hope Karla finds a proper balance between her to voices soon, I love play but she can be crueler than micheal. I like the setup for the shrunken it’s actually pretty damn good if I understand it right, hell they are better living than most normal people ( minus the giant wanting to play) if I understand the setup. Damn micheal really is setting up his shrunken to be well cared for.

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Glad you enjoyed it. I usually worry when I add more character focused stories that they won't be enjoyed as much.

Did you have a question about the cage room? Something unclear? Remember I'm writing it so I know what it's suppose to look like. And what is clear to me might not be getting translated to you guys, the Readers. So a question or uncertainly could help me fix an issue I didn't realize I had made.

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[anaio10]

It seems that Michael is behaving more like he did at the beginning of the ship's history and is taking more advantage of the possibilities of those little female toys. I love his darker side.