The Tourists: Another Guest

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Ch 22A: The Tourists: Another Guest

Post by HHunter1 » Wed Apr 13, 2022 6:07 pm

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Ch 22B: The Tourists: Another Guest

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CH 22C: The Tourists: Another Guest

Post by HHunter1 » Wed Apr 13, 2022 6:11 pm

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Re: The Tourists: Another Guest

Post by Underscore » Sat Apr 23, 2022 10:06 pm

Brilliant to read and so glad our first Crossover csme out so great! But yeah, I think the next one will definitely have to be a multi-chapter one. Maybe a little Shrunken exchange? Just some food for thought 😜
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Re: The Tourists: Another Guest

Post by HHunter1 » Sat Apr 23, 2022 11:29 pm

Yeah I thought it worked if long. An temporary Shrunken exchange between this group and yours, that could happen.

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Re: The Tourists: Another Guest

Post by Underscore » Sun Apr 24, 2022 5:56 pm

Brilliant. Just lemme know, I'm so on board for that!! 😝
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Re: The Tourists: Another Guest

Post by anaio10 » Wed Jun 22, 2022 9:21 pm

I always liked the port days you put in, although I preferred more description of manipulation of the small, terrified specimens while collecting.

Another thing I loved, is that at the beginning of the saga, is the depersonalization with which the minis were treated. For example: women with necklaces made of young boys glued together. A lot of imagination has come out of that part of the stories.

Thanks for the new chapters.
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Re: The Tourists: Another Guest

Post by HHunter1 » Wed Jun 22, 2022 9:44 pm

OK, noted. More description of the newly made Shrunken squirming in his grip or the like. I'll try to add more of that. I won't promise as I tend to get an idea and just focus on that over the little fun aspects. I think it might have to do with me slipping away from that to focusing more on his fun collecting with Crystal. Forgetting the fun of just collecting.

This is supposed to be the story taking a closer look at how Shrunken are more dehumanized. So thanks. I had been frankly stuck on the next chapter for this series. You might have sparked at start of an idea. Fingers crossed anyway. :)

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