The Tourists. Home Life

[HHunter1]

Thanks so much for your comment. It is such a boost to my faltering urge to write. I'm glad you enjoyed that twist. I was worried I was foreshadowing this coming to much. It is the world she was pulled into. Hope you continue to enjoy Karla ongoing story.

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[anaio10]

Wow, it's refreshing to see Crystal's amusing mischief and how well she treats the toys, which is what they're there for.

I love that the stewardess doesn't have her job secured and can turn into a doll at the whim of a superior.

[HHunter1]

Glad you enjoyed. Crystal had to be restrained while talking with Karla. She quite enjoys her toys, but Karla is another high power member's pet. So Crystal could only tease a little.

As for poor Loren. Randy fired her and had her Processing rushed. But he didn't have her turned into a Shrunken. Loren failing the Processing did. And as her failing her duties got her fired, which prompted her Processing, she was then given to Randy as the one that she failed. I guess I didn't explain that well enough in story. Sorry, I'll try to remember to edit in a better explanation in story later. Either way, getting fired as a low level Company Member can be dangerous. Unless your totally loyal to the Company.

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[ALittleConfused]

Really happy to see more home life. I'm really interested in seeing how the situation with Howard turns out. Karla's had it pretty good for a while, I like that she's being reminded what it's like to be a normal shrunken.

[HHunter1]

Well thank you for your comment, getting those is very encouraging. I'm glad you enjoyed it and hope you continue to enjoy this and other stories of mine.

Honestly I'm not sure how long this arch will go. I do plan to end this book of her adventures with them getting home and start the next book of adventures with this weighing on her mind. But for how long and what else comes from it I haven't fully decided yet.

On a side note, on my Buy Me A Coffee page I've started a Members only story for Members Green Status and higher. Aiming for short chapters. Main character being the guy that made a shrinking device and starts collecting by mistake (Maybe?). I am making him a bit of an Incel, so it wasn't his fault that he had to start shrinking women. (<-sarcasm)

Thank You again for your comment,
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[ALittleConfused]

Loved this chapter. That glimpse into the breeding factory was great.

[HHunter1]

Glad you enjoyed it. Did it make you want to order from Grant Factories?
Honestly I'm a bit worried it was a bit dark for Karla story line and would put people off.
What did everyone else think?

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[anaio10]

Great chapters on how the little toys are properly treated.

[HHunter1]

It was a bit of a turn in Karla happy little life. Glad your enjoyed them.

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[ALittleConfused]

Love that Chrissy/Karla action. Karla's whole perspective shift after the situation with Howard is is really interesting, I keep thinking someone is going to notice her hesitation at some point and figure out something is wrong.

[HHunter1]

Howard's actions have put a new stress in her life. Guess we'll have to see how that pans out in the next book of Karla's experiences.

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[ALittleConfused]

I was really looking forward to more of this story and you did not disappoint. I love it when Karla gets to play at full size.

[HHunter1]

Thank you for the comment.

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I am looking forward to writing more of Karla's story. And yes there will be more of her playing at Full sized in the coming collection of chapter. Hope no one minds if I call them books.

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[Underscore]

As always, an absolute pleasure to read! Glad to see you back.

[HHunter1]

Glad you enjoyed it. As for being back, kind of. Mostly focusing on the story on my Coffee Page and the odd random idea that tumbles through my head. Hope to really get back to my ongoing stories soon.

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