That Portal

[HHunter1]

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[Nicodemus]

As a pervert, I do enjoy when younger boys can fully explore their desires with helpless, little playthings.

Oh yes, boys will be boys. Do carry on!

[HHunter1]

Yes its always fun when your strange Uncle gets you a trans dimensional device that allows you to access action figure sized people.

Glad your enjoying the story.

HH1

[DrivenHand]

This story is great! This chapter was especially great with the introduction of the mother/daughter trio. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Keep it up!

[HHunter1]

Thanks for the comment. Glad your enjoying it. I thought some people might like the family trio. I do plan on writing more. Honestly a little stuck on what to do in the next chapter. The one after that I know what I want, but the space of time before that one I'm blanking on. But that happens.

HH1
PS: Link below if you can and want to support my writing. Previews, members only story, blah blah blah.

[randomguywhosthere]

Just caught up to the most recent chapter, loving it so far! My mind tends to go wild when I fixate on stuff like this so I'm just going to get all my thoughts down here.

Before deciding to fully give it a read, I skimmed through a few parts and initially thought it seemed a bit repetitive, but upon actually reading the whole way through I really like all the different scenarios so far. The whole concept is elevated by all the implied intricacies of this other, tiny world, and our protagonist slowly learning about the origin of the "elves" while simultaneously using his discoveries to squeeze maximum pleasure out of them.
Especially liking all the varying reactions of the different cultures to encountering signs of giants, and the rather comical extent their inherit racism towards each other is, even nearly overpowering their fear of giants.

This most recent chapter is definitely a peak in the escalation so far, especially with Marshall coming to the realization of "wait, what am I even going to do with so many elves?" I am in great anticipation of what sorts of activities he and his friend might get up to once their pets become more "disposable..." Personally, I'm hoping for vore, as I've enjoyed the vore content you've made in the past. It feels like the story has been hinting at that with the elves clearly being afraid of that specific fate, that one scene where Marshall's growling stomach frightens them, and even the fact that multiple chapters ended with him and Todd being hungry after playing with their elves.
Also, as DrivenHand commented, I do like the family group of elves. I have a bit of a thing for younger tinies and I like the detail of them being inexperienced with the giant-praising rituals of their race. A bit surprising no other kids/younger elves got caught during Marshal and Todd's rampage.

If I have any nit-picks, its the scenes during the rampage where Marshal and Todd crush the police officers attacking them. It felt a little jarring that the actual act of crushing or the violent fates of the elves they kicked/threw around was kept super vague through the whole scene. I didn't even realize they hurt anyone until after they escaped and the blood on their shoes was mentioned.

Lastly, addressing some things you said in other comments:
You asked readers for ideas on the ages of the protagonists, and no one replied. Personally, based on the events of the 9 chapters so far, late teens in college seems like the most appropriate age category for them to fit in for both their level of maturity and whatever these "classes" are that were mentioned a few times.

As you said you were stumped for what to do next chapter, some ideas assuming its a sort of filler chapter:
1. Marshal brings one or more elves into the shower with him, using them to pleasure himself while also cleaning himself off and the elves.
2. Going to sleep with an elf in bed with him or tangled in his clothes.
3. Trapping elves inside underwear/socks and then doing something casual like watching a movie/playing video games.
4. Bringing some elves to the dinner table for a meal and tormenting them by mixing them in with the food.
5. Some licking/mawplay to intentionally torment the elves as that seems to be what freaks them out the most.
Even if you don't outright use any of these ideas I hope they at the very least provide the creative spark to continue this great series!

[HHunter1]

Wow, thanks for your comment. I just got back from work so I'm a little tired. Sorry if my reply isn't as thought out as your kind message was.

I'm thrilled your enjoying this much. It is a fun story to poke around in. The chance to build different cultures to our world's own. The different race's reactions. I also been kicking around the idea of exploring their cultures a little more. Maybe have Marshall watch them a little more. Things I'll keep in mind I guess.

Sorry I wasn't clearer on what was happening during the boy's rampage. I was focused on their excited rushed nature. How they were hurrying to do things. I hadn't thought about explaining the aftermath of their more violent actions. I'll try to think of that when they rampage again. (I was going to write if they rampage, but we all know those boys are going to at some point so why not be completely honest about it. )

Thanks for the suggestions. I can't say I'll use them, they are all very interesting ideas. I could very well use them all. But even if I don't, I can see them influencing other ideas. Like how someone saying a certain phrase will get a song stuck in your head. (Or is that only me that happens too?)

Older teens seem a good age for the boys. Marshall uses classes instead of school due to his pseudo intellectual personality I'm using for him. Same reason he doesn't use slang terms for body parts. (I hope I didn't slip up on that one.) He's the type of kid that would use the British Maths instead of just saying math. Which leads to, why didn't they grab more teen-like elf maidens? I tend to use teen SW/tiny characters a lot. I was trying to not include as many in this story. If that's what reader want, more teen elves, let me know. Otherwise Marshall and Todd will likely mostly collect more mature elf ladies.

Hope that answered your questions, if not you know how to contact me. Thanks again,
HH1
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[anaio10]

Your rampage scene was great, I hope the guys go out and have fun like that more often.

As for the type of toys captured, variety is the spice of life, I guess they have a handful of mature and teenage girls to choose from. The important thing is to have a good time with them.

[HHunter1]

I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was fun to write.

Yes the boys will enjoy their pets no matter what islands they are from.

HH1

[Shurashulgin]

This is one of my favorite posts/stories on shrunken woman. It's just so good

[HHunter1]

Thanks for the encouragement. I'm glad your enjoying the story. I hope I can continue to entertain you in the future.

HH1

[Nicodemus]

Personally, I enjoy the cruelty and violence.

[HHunter1]

Good to know. Thanks for your input.

HH1

[Nicodemus]

My pleasure.

Now, be about updating your stories!

[HHunter1]

Sorry about that. Summer heat and change of job position has messed with my writing mind a little. So my focus has been on my Coffee page story. (Link Below.) Hopefully the cooler seasons will get me typing more in the future. Thanks for encouraging me.

HH1

[Nicodemus]

Real life can be such a bother.

[HHunter1]

I know, stupid life. Needing to eat and bills. Why can't I just write my naughty stories all day in comfort.

HH1

[HHunter1]

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[Nicodemus]

A most interesting turn!

[HHunter1]

I know, I don't do much Vore. So is it a good interesting or bad interesting?

Thanks for your comment,
HH1

[HHunter1]

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