She's Asking for It - (a rewrite of an old story)

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Post by ThumbLoverVer2 » Wed Feb 15, 2023 12:12 am

I hope we get an continuation of this.

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Post by Sumguy14 » Wed Feb 15, 2023 5:07 am

hello everyone reading. I have done more work on "She's Asking for It"... but it is not ready yet. You've all been more than patient. I will do my best to make it a priority. In the meantime, if you want to read more of my work and check out some awesome art by Bare-Faced-Cheek you should head over to DA and hit up BFC's gallery for "Miniportation".

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Post by Aussie_Lurker » Thu Feb 16, 2023 1:41 pm

I still remain hopeful that Roxanne will kind of get what she wanted-namely found as a mini-but not by Hank....but by some random stranger (preferably someone much younger than Roxanne).

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Post by Doll_size_girl » Thu Sep 28, 2023 8:02 am

I agree with Aussie_Lurker, that would be perfect.

I deeply hope you post a continuation for this story, she needs to be captured! ^_^
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Re: She's Asking for It - (a rewrite of an old story)

Post by DocRick » Thu Sep 28, 2023 2:02 pm

Doll_size_girl wrote:
Thu Sep 28, 2023 8:02 am
I agree with Aussie_Lurker, that would be perfect.

I deeply hope you post a continuation for this story, she needs to be captured! ^_^


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Re: She's Asking for It - (a rewrite of an old story)

Post by DocRick » Thu Sep 28, 2023 2:09 pm

Tina-Tiny wrote:
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Oh...to be tiny and vulnerable...and to be played with and driven wild.........
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Post by DocRick » Thu Sep 28, 2023 3:44 pm

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When I read the part of the story where Roxanne is sneaking around tiny and naked, I could feel my own breath coming short in my throat and the excitement building within me. The feeling of being tiny and helpless and vulnerable and wondering every moment if you are going to be discovered in this condition...and at that point risking being trapped and picked up and held in a giant hand and played with...wanting it to happen deep down inside but also afraid of it happening because you can never be sure what the giant may do once you are in his power, and you won't be able to do anything at all to stop him, that is if you wanted to...even assuming that you are discovered by the right giant, the one you have been wanting to find you like this...well, it's almost too much to bear and is at the point of overloading your mind, your senses and your whole tiny body!

So it's...uh...it's kind of like that.

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Re: She's Asking for It - (a rewrite of an old story)

Post by Kara Dollgirl » Sat Sep 30, 2023 2:14 am

DocRick wrote:
Thu Sep 28, 2023 3:44 pm
Kara Dollgirl wrote:
Tue Jan 12, 2021 4:31 am

Roxanne rolled her eyes a little and shook her head as she reached her hand across the table and took Hank’s. She guided his sandwich down to his plate and just held his hand firmly. “Haven’t you been listening Henry? I’m just saying it could happen. Do I want to be reduced in stature and status to a mere plaything whose only purpose in life would be to keep her master happy, entertained, and sexually gratified? Would I enjoy being kept in a cage as the ultimate status symbol? Do I fantasize about my master showing me off to anyone he wished too, flaunting me in front of his friends, and making me join in when he brings women home? I would have to be some sort of secret sexual deviant to think like that, wouldn’t I? A woman with a long hidden fantasy about being a man’s plaything, one that she’s had to repress since puberty. No, of course I wouldn’t want that more than anything in the world Henry that would just be silly.”

When I read the part of the story where Roxanne is sneaking around tiny and naked, I could feel my own breath coming short in my throat and the excitement building within me. The feeling of being tiny and helpless and vulnerable and wondering every moment if you are going to be discovered in this condition...and at that point risking being trapped and picked up and held in a giant hand and played with...wanting it to happen deep down inside but also afraid of it happening because you can never be sure what the giant may do once you are in his power, and you won't be able to do anything at all to stop him, that is if you wanted to...even assuming that you are discovered by the right giant, the one you have been wanting to find you like this...well, it's almost too much to bear and is at the point of overloading your mind, your senses and your whole tiny body!

So it's...uh...it's kind of like that.

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Oh My! I can't believe you took some of our reactions to this story and crafted some images to make our shrunken fantasies come true! Thanks, Big Guy! :heart:

I think the reason I was so enticed by this story was that the female protagonist in it was one of the small (pun intended) coterie of women who unabashedly relish the thought of being someone's little doll or toy. Like myself. Like my friend Tina. I have long fantasized about lying helpless, tiny and naked in a giant hand. I believe our friend Roxanne has been seduced by the same kind of 'doll dreams'.

Thanks for highlighting and illuminating this wonderful story, Doc. I got tingles all over just thinking about it again!
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Re: She's Asking for It - (a rewrite of an old story)

Post by DocRick » Sat Sep 30, 2023 3:08 am

Kara Dollgirl wrote:
Sat Sep 30, 2023 2:14 am

Oh My! I can't believe you took some of our reactions to this story and crafted some images to make our shrunken fantasies come true! Thanks, Big Guy! :heart:

I think the reason I was so enticed by this story was that the female protagonist in it was one of the small (pun intended) coterie of women who unabashedly relish the thought of being someone's little doll or toy. Like myself. Like my friend Tina. I have long fantasized about lying helpless, tiny and naked in a giant hand. I believe our friend Roxanne has been seduced by the same kind of 'doll dreams'.

Thanks for highlighting and illuminating this wonderful story, Doc. I got tingles all over just thinking about it again!
Tiny Hugs,
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You're welcome for the illustrations.....and the tingles. :D
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Re: She's Asking for It - (a rewrite of an old story)

Post by Kara Dollgirl » Sat Sep 30, 2023 6:07 am

DocRick wrote:
Sat Sep 30, 2023 3:08 am
Kara Dollgirl wrote:
Sat Sep 30, 2023 2:14 am

Oh My! I can't believe you took some of our reactions to this story and crafted some images to make our shrunken fantasies come true! Thanks, Big Guy! :heart:

I think the reason I was so enticed by this story was that the female protagonist in it was one of the small (pun intended) coterie of women who unabashedly relish the thought of being someone's little doll or toy. Like myself. Like my friend Tina. I have long fantasized about lying helpless, tiny and naked in a giant hand. I believe our friend Roxanne has been seduced by the same kind of 'doll dreams'.

Thanks for highlighting and illuminating this wonderful story, Doc. I got tingles all over just thinking about it again!
Tiny Hugs,
Kara :kiss:
You're welcome for the illustrations.....and the tingles. :D
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"O...M...G...! This is even...b-better than...t-tingles! D-d-don't....stop!"
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Re: She's Asking for It - (a rewrite of an old story)

Post by Doll_size_girl » Mon Oct 02, 2023 2:04 am

In story format preferably :3

Whatever continuation you did develop, ven if not finished, would still be appreciated.

Assuming the writer is still kicking around somewhere.

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Re: She's Asking for It - (a rewrite of an old story)

Post by bigguy123456789 » Sat Apr 12, 2025 11:57 pm

Has the author ever said if they would finish this? If not will someone take a stab at finishing it if the author gives their permission? Also, does anyone have the original story that was completed?

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Re: She's Asking for It - (a rewrite of an old story)

Post by Sumguy14 » Sun Apr 13, 2025 2:35 am

bigguy123456789 wrote:
Sat Apr 12, 2025 11:57 pm
Has the author ever said if they would finish this? If not will someone take a stab at finishing it if the author gives their permission? Also, does anyone have the original story that was completed?
Who was the author?
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Post by bigguy123456789 » Sun Apr 13, 2025 3:01 am

Is this your new account? I didn’t realize you were still around. Do you have the original one? It was really good but I can’t find it.

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Re: She's Asking for It - (a rewrite of an old story)

Post by Sumguy14 » Sun Apr 13, 2025 11:44 am

bigguy123456789 wrote:
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Is this your new account? I didn’t realize you were still around. Do you have the original one? It was really good but I can’t find it.
You know it's funny you say you didn't realize I was still around, seeing as you were a part of the thread in January of this year that was trying to bring back a different unfinished work of mine.

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Re: She's Asking for It - (a rewrite of an old story)

Post by bigguy123456789 » Mon Apr 14, 2025 3:02 pm

Sumguy14 wrote:
Sun Apr 13, 2025 11:44 am
bigguy123456789 wrote:
Sun Apr 13, 2025 3:01 am
Is this your new account? I didn’t realize you were still around. Do you have the original one? It was really good but I can’t find it.
You know it's funny you say you didn't realize I was still around, seeing as you were a part of the thread in January of this year that was trying to bring back a different unfinished work of mine.

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I apologize if my comment was taken the wrong way. I definitely wasn't trying to cause any offense. I checked the submitting profile and didn't see any recent comments, and since people disappear from this forum and community so often, I assumed I wouldn't be able to get a hold of you. I honestly don't remember interacting with you earlier this year.

I mostly just wanted to see if anyone had the original one that was completed since I couldn't find it. I'm a huge fan of your stories and am grateful that you released what you have with us. Cheers!

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Re: She's Asking for It - (a rewrite of an old story)

Post by Sumguy14 » Tue Apr 15, 2025 10:03 am

bigguy123456789 wrote:
Mon Apr 14, 2025 3:02 pm
Sumguy14 wrote:
Sun Apr 13, 2025 11:44 am
bigguy123456789 wrote:
Sun Apr 13, 2025 3:01 am
Is this your new account? I didn’t realize you were still around. Do you have the original one? It was really good but I can’t find it.
You know it's funny you say you didn't realize I was still around, seeing as you were a part of the thread in January of this year that was trying to bring back a different unfinished work of mine.

If you want to ask me about past works, DM me.
I apologize if my comment was taken the wrong way. I definitely wasn't trying to cause any offense. I checked the submitting profile and didn't see any recent comments, and since people disappear from this forum and community so often, I assumed I wouldn't be able to get a hold of you. I honestly don't remember interacting with you earlier this year.

I mostly just wanted to see if anyone had the original one that was completed since I couldn't find it. I'm a huge fan of your stories and am grateful that you released what you have with us. Cheers!
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Re: She's Asking for It - (a rewrite of an old story)

Post by Aussie_Lurker » Sun Apr 20, 2025 8:30 am

Sumguy14 wrote:
Tue Apr 15, 2025 10:03 am
bigguy123456789 wrote:
Mon Apr 14, 2025 3:02 pm
Sumguy14 wrote:
Sun Apr 13, 2025 11:44 am


You know it's funny you say you didn't realize I was still around, seeing as you were a part of the thread in January of this year that was trying to bring back a different unfinished work of mine.

If you want to ask me about past works, DM me.
I apologize if my comment was taken the wrong way. I definitely wasn't trying to cause any offense. I checked the submitting profile and didn't see any recent comments, and since people disappear from this forum and community so often, I assumed I wouldn't be able to get a hold of you. I honestly don't remember interacting with you earlier this year.

I mostly just wanted to see if anyone had the original one that was completed since I couldn't find it. I'm a huge fan of your stories and am grateful that you released what you have with us. Cheers!
Reposted.
Howdy Sumguy. So glad to see that you're still around. Whilst I fully understand how difficult it can be to get around to finishing a story (believe me, my life is littered with at least half a dozen SW stories that I've started, but never completed), I seriously hope you'll consider having another bash at continuing this story......perhaps using some of the ideas we once discussed a few years back ;). Anyway, great to see you here again, as I said before.

Yours,

Aussie_Lurker.

P.S. BTW, this story did inspire me to have a crack at writing something very similar-with a little assistance from AI. I am reasonably happy with what I came up with, but its obviously not a patch on either this version of your story or the original :).

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Re: She's Asking for It - (a rewrite of an old story)

Post by vicky567 » Sun Apr 20, 2025 12:34 pm

Love your story, and I love your art too, though I haven't been able to find much of it for quite a while!