Maya's Downfall F/f - Part 8 - Rough draft

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I'm looking for feedback on this before I release it. This is a long chapter. Part of my inspiration for this was My Mini Jenny by the great Sallyfourth who I think is the best writer in this genre. Her story was the first story I ever read with this fetish, so I wanted to pay homage in my first story. Unfortunately, the first one I released people told me it was way too derivative of her work so I deleted it and rewrote everything. In my defense, I uploaded the wrong version so it wasn't nearly as bad as it seemed, but I apologized to her and she graciously accepted my apology and even offered some helpful advice! I also linked her story in my original Deviantart published story, so I wasn't trying to trick anyone into thinking it was something it wasn't. This is my first story, so I'm still learning.

But anyway, I was hoping people could give me feedback on this rough draft before I officially release it. I want to make sure it's not too derivative. I honestly don't think it is. I just wanted to put my own spin on one of my favorite scenes. And if this sucks let me know. I won't take offense to anything. I want honest feedback.

Chapter 8

“Get in here, Katy!” Janet’s voice cracked through the office.

Katherine’s lips curled into a small smile. The irony wasn’t lost on her. Here she was, a CEO worth millions, being ordered around by a mid-level accounting manager. Rising from her seat, her modest outfit was a stark contrast to the high-end fashions she typically wore.

“Why didn’t you follow the format?” asked from behind her desk, her face pinched with frustration. “We’ve been through this already.”

“This way is better.” Katherine replied, her voice soft, playing the role of the fresh-faced graduate. Inside, she fought back a laugh. She’d been running corporate finances when Janet was still learning basic spreadsheets. Plus, she had fun messing with Maya’s accounting. Technically she was doing a good job, but if it caused confusion and doubt, so be it!

“Young lady you might be under the impression you understand it all, but you’ve barely left school. To succeed in this position, you’ll need to follow my instructions. I don’t care about your prestigious university or your impressive recommendations. You’re still green in this business.”

Katherine bristled at being chastised, clenching her hands into fists. Katherine’s teeth ground together as Janet’s patronizing tone echoed through her mind. Young lady. The contempt saturated each word. At nearly forty years old, with her fancy business degree and decade and a half of corporate leadership under her belt, she was enduring a scolding meant for some naive newcomer.

She did have to admit that her meticulously constructed disguise and natural appearance certainly gave off the impression of a fresh-faced novice, and this was exactly the image her colleagues had accepted. When not using her enchanted state, she retained the youthful features from before her first transformation. Looking no older than twenty-two, she could understand why Janet spoke to her with such condescension. In Katherine’s position, she’d likely respond with identical patronizing behavior, she had to concede. In her natural form, she looked barely old enough to drink, let alone run a Fortune 500 company. The dark contacts hiding her green eyes and temporary blonde hair dye completed the illusion of a young new hire.

Her slight figure and innocent features grew tense while Janet droned on about the correct formatting. Katherine’s fingers drummed steadily against her thigh while she fought the urge to tell this middle manager that she had created numerous financial systems the company now depended on.

“I expect better next time,” Janet huffed, turning back to her computer screen.

“The only reason you are is because if I don’t I’ll get fired and I can’t watch Maya’s downfall,” Katherine thought to herself. Otherwise I’d mess up your books so badly you’d have to stay late months. If you only knew who was really standing here," Katherine thought, suppressing a smirk.

But for now, Katherine would play her part. She’d endure Janet’s patronizing attitude, all while watching Maya’s from her strategic vantage point of a junior employee. The temporary blow to her ego was worth it to see her plan unfold.

“Yes, Janet,” Katherine murmured, letting just a hint of sarcasm color her tone. “I’ll be sure to follow the proper format next time.”

“Is that sass, young lady?” Janet’s voice sharpened, her thin lips pressing into a hard line.

Katherine’s heart raced, not from fear but from the effort of containing her irritation. She lowered her eyes, playing the part of the chastised secretary.

“Sorry,” she mumbled, channeling the meek persona she’d crafted as Katy.

Janet leaned back in her chair, assuming the air of a wise mentor. “I think you have potential, Katy, but you need to learn to be more professional.” She gestured vaguely toward the secretarial pool. “And cut back on all that idle chatter and gossip with coworkers. This isn’t your sorority house.”

Katherine’s fingers curled into her palms, her manicured nails digging into her skin leaving marks. The urge to reveal herself, to watch Janet’s face drain of color as she realized who she’d been lecturing, was almost overwhelming. Unfortunately, if she revealed her true identity in her current guise, Janet would simply mock her and likely recommend her psychiatric help. Instead, she kept her head bowed, her dyed blonde hair falling forward to hide her expression.

Judy made a shooing motion with her hand, dismissing Katherine like an errant child. The insult of being waved away burned through Katherine’s chest as she turned and walked out of the office, her cheeks flushed with genuine embarrassment.

While exiting Janet’s office, she collided with a larger body. The impact sent Katherine reeling as documents burst upward, drifting down around them like snowflakes. Above her, Suzy from the finance department loomed with her fists planted at her waist, shooting daggers with that familiar condescending stare Katherine had witnessed so many times before - though typically she’d been the one looking down, not up.

“Watch where you’re going, Katy!” Suzy’s voice carried across the office floor. “God, you’re such a bimbo.”

Katherine’s frustration finally boiled over. “Well, if your fat ass didn’t take up the whole hallway, maybe I wouldn’t run into you.” She planted her small hands on her hips, tilting her head back to meet Suzy’s shocked gaze. “Eat a salad for once. No wonder your boyfriend broke up with you.”

The words struck like physical blows. Suzy’s face crumpled, her eyes welling with tears. “You bitch! How could you?” She spun on her heel and fled down the hallway, leaving the scattered papers forgotten on the floor.

Katherine watched her go with a mix of satisfaction and guilt. She hadn’t meant to be so cruel, but after enduring weeks of Suzy’s snide comments and rude behavior, something had snapped. The woman had been particularly vicious to the younger staff members.

Still, as Katherine bent to gather the fallen papers, she couldn’t help but feel a twinge of remorse. This petty office drama felt beneath her now, even if Suzy had deserved the reality check. Today’s frustrations had proven one thing - she needed to accelerate her plans. Playing the role of meek secretary while enduring constant belittlement was wearing thin. The sooner Maya fell into her trap, the sooner Katherine could return to her proper place at the top of the corporate ladder.


Katherine found herself seeking out Ava’s desk, drawn to the one person who she genuinely liked at this office.

“Rough day?” Ava’s gentle smile provided a welcome respite from the morning’s humiliations.

“Those two - Janet and Suzy,” Katherine lowered herself onto the edge of Ava’s desk, her small shoulders drooping. “They are so annoying.”

“Janet isn’t terrible once you know her,” Ava suggested. “She might just be feeling slighted,” she added with a soft chuckle. “Did you happen to overstep somewhere?”

Katherine confessed to attempting an overhaul of Janet’s entire financial process.

“I was only trying to make it run more smoothly, I swear. All I wanted was to help!”

“But Suzy is awful to everyone.” Ava’s eyes gleamed with an intensity Katherine hadn’t noticed before. “But things won’t always be like this. Especially for Maya.”

Katherine perked up, noting the edge in Ava’s voice. “Oh? What do you mean?”

“Let’s just say...” Ava leaned closer, lowering her voice to a whisper. “I’ve discovered something interesting about our dear leader. Something that will change everything.”

Katherine fought to keep her expression neutral, though her heart raced with excitement. She recognized that look in Ava’s eyes. It was the same predatory gleam she’d once had when she’d discovered her boss’s secret.

“I can’t say more,” Ava continued, “but soon, very soon, she’ll learn what it feels like to be small.”

Katherine’s spirits lifted immediately. The morning’s annoyances faded away, replaced by an erotic anticipation. All the humiliation, from the coffee runs, to the condescending remarks, to the tight cubicle, suddenly felt worth it. Her plan was working perfectly.

“I hope you get her good,” Katherine said softly, allowing genuine emotion to color her voice. After all, who better than her knew exactly how satisfying it would be to see Maya taken down a few sizes - literally.

But Katherine was tired of waiting. Ava was taking too long. Tonight, she’d break into Maya’s office and look for something useful. She had orchestrated it so the whole office, including Maya, would be empty tonight. Maya had to be taken down a peg, and it had to happen soon.


* * *

Katherine crept into Maya’s darkened office, her heart racing with anticipation. After three weeks of watching Ava hunt Maya like she was a timid mouse, she’d decided it was time to push things along. The entire office lay empty and silent, perfect for research and for setting up whatever trap she could devise.

An ephemeral touch tickled her spine, causing her to shiver. “Why does Maya keep it so cold here?” Katherine thought to herself. “I guess that ice queen needs to be in her natural habitat to survive.”

A slight tickling sensation spread through her feet as she tiptoed towards Maya’s desk, causing her to scratch her foot in annoyance. One of her flats almost slipped off as she took another step, but she barely noticed, slipping her foot back into it absentmindedly and continuing to scan Maya’s desk for anything useful.

“There better be something useful here,” she grumbled. “I didn’t flirt with that gross IT guy to get access to turn off the cameras for nothing.”

Being in her regular body had its downsides. Her youthful appearance of a recent college grad mixed with her petite stature meant she constantly had to deal with unwanted attention from creepy men who thought they had a chance. If she’d been able to use her augmented shape, that nerd would have been too awestruck to even string a sentence together, eagerly following her every command.

She rifled through Maya’s desk drawers, searching methodically for anything that could give Ava an advantage in catching Maya vulnerable and triggering her shrinking. Her sleeves keep dropping over her wrists, causing her to periodically stop and adjust her outfit. “I’m so sick of this cheap fabric,” Katherine thought. “I can’t wait to be done and finally wear my real wardrobe again. Once I have gotten a little payback on my good friend Maya.”

Katherine felt a pleasant warmth coursing through her body, thinking about how Maya would deal with being shrunk and dominated by little Ava. An even more pleasant warmth spread from her tummy down to her groin. “Oooh, this has me even more excited than normal!” thought Katherine, barely holding in moan from the unexpected pleasure.

The locked bottom drawer caught her attention. This could be useful, she thought. But first she’d focus on getting into Maya’s laptop and tablet. As she grabbed the tablet, the tingling in her body intensified. Katherine froze, finally registering what was happening. Her clothes felt looser, the desk seemed slightly taller. That ethereal touch from earlier that she had thought was just the cold.

“No, no, no...” she whispered, stumbling backward. One of her stockinged feet had slipped out of her shoes and touched the cool floor as invisible fingers began dancing across her soles. She fought back a giggle, dropping to her knees as the tickling sensation grew stronger. The spell she knew so intimately - the very same one she had used during her rise to the top - had decided she had interfered in its plans enough.

“No please!” she gasped between giggles. “I didn’t even - ah! - touch her boots! I just wanted to help Ava and speed it along! I was just helping!”

But the magic didn’t listen, beginning her punishment for interfering in its plan. Katherine had been warned before of what could happen if she meddled in its plans, but since she had escalated multiple times without any consequences, she was convinced those warnings had been exaggerated.

Each wave of tickling sent shivers up her spine, forcing helpless laughter from her throat. Her blouse began to hang loose around her slowly dwindling frame, sleeves already dangling past her hands. The sensations intensified, leaving her writhing on the floor in pleasure. Giggles kept pouring out of her, the pleasurable touch rendering her powerless against the supernatural energy she’d foolishly attempted to control.

As she lay on the floor, Katherine closed her eyes, giving into her fate, letting the spell’s pleasurable sensations wash over her. She was powerless to stop it, so she knew it was pointless to fight whatever it had planned as her punishment.

Those unseen hands operated with meticulous care, beginning their work at her waist. Strangely, while she shrank, she also felt herself taking on her enhanced form. The enchantment was reshaping her, restoring her voluptuous curves, enhancing the feminine slopes of her figure, even as her height steadily diminished. This process felt both recognizable and foreign to her. It was unlike anything she’d experienced in prior transformations. The enchantment’s power surged through her frame in rhythmic pulses, every ripple triggering a new change. Her body responded eagerly to the transformative touch, every nerve ending alive with sensation as she surrendered to the process of being remolded and reshaped.

Katherine whimpered as the touch drifted higher, softly caressing and squeezing her small, perky breasts. Waves of ecstasy rippled through her, blending warmth and delicate pressure as she quivered in delight. She arched her back involuntarily as the soft, ghostly touch weaved its enchantment over her bosom. The fullness gradually increased, adding substantial mass and roundness while at the same time melting away. The feeling was intoxicating. Her perky B cups had now grown back to the ample bosom she had so desperately missed while undercover.

“Oh...What is going on?” she cried out softly, the sound laced with pleasure.

The ephemeral hands moved to her shoulders next and began pushing and pulling. Stretching them apart, adding strength and muscle, their touch was firm but gentle. Those broad shoulders of her enhanced form, a symbol of her power and presence, slowly began to return. She found her body welcoming the metamorphosis, her body yielding willingly. Katherine felt her posture shift, savoring the sensations of being sculpted back to the form she’d relished since she had first discovered the spell all those years ago.

The ethereal caress traced down her arms next, molding and shaping until they regained their powerful, athletic definition. Simultaneously, it felt like her fingers were being pulled on, extending them, increasing their strength. Katherine wiggled them experimentally, enjoying the renewed strength. It felt so strange, shrinking yet returning to her enhanced form at the same time. She hadn’t even known this was possible.

The ghostly touch descended, molding and stretching her lower limbs. The sensation was peculiar - a concurrent force of compression and extension. Her powerful legs and toned thighs, which had once turned heads as she strode through the office, returned to their familiar athletic form, despite their gradual reduction in scale.

The mysterious energy flowed down to her toes, its ethereal caress causing her to let out an involuntary laugh. Her toes curled defensively, instinctively trying to protect themselves from the ticklish touch. It glided across her soles, every delicate touch sending tremors through her shrinking body.

“Oh!” Katherine squirmed on the floor, unable to contain her laughter as the magical energy danced across her vulnerable feet. The tingling sensation intensified, and Katherine gripped the nearby chair as waves of ticklish pleasure coursed through her body. Each ghostly stroke across her arches drew forth more giggles, her composure crumbling in the face of such overwhelming sensations.

“Stop, please,” she gasped between fits of laughter, though she knew the spell wouldn’t listen. The magical hands persisted, reducing her height with methodical care. Katherine’s whole body trembled with the effort of enduring such exquisite ticklish torment. She felt herself shrinking further, probably below three feet now.

Without warning, the ethereal touches shifted upward from her feet, traveling along her legs before she had reached her intended shrunken height. Their touch now playful rather than transformative. The abrupt change left her confused.

Katherine struggled to make sense of the change. “What could this mean?” she wondered silently.

An ethereal swat connected with her magically-altered bottom, causing Katherine to startle at the unanticipated touch. She let out a high-pitched yelp, its resonance sounding peculiar in the increasingly vast office space. Another phantom slap, more forceful this time, struck her diminutive posterior, drawing a sharp intake of breath as the tingling sensation spread throughout her partially-reduced form. When she instinctively tried to protect herself, the spectral fingers flipped her over, preventing her defensive reaction. They lingered on her bottom for a moment, tracing the curve of her now-petite rear before venturing further.

“Oh my, the spell really didn’t like my meddling,” she whispered breathlessly.

Katherine shifted on the floor, her breath catching in her throat as the ethereal touch reached the delicate skin between her legs. A wave of heat pulsed through her core, the unexpected intimacy making her squirm. The spectral hands began to explore her most sensitive area, their touch feather-light at first. Katherine gasped, her body tensing in anticipation. The sensations reminded her of how Maya had dominated her that fateful weekend.

“Oh my god...” she whispered.

A soft moan escaped her lips, the sound muffled by the plush carpet beneath her cheek. The fingers continued their exploration, their touch growing more insistent as they delved deeper into her moist heat. A low groan rumbled in Katherine’s chest, the pleasure building with each stroke. They entered her, driving her wild. It had been so long since she had been touched like this, so long since she had allowed herself to be so vulnerable. The ghostly fingers stretched her, filling her completely, mimicking the way Maya had so expertly dominated her. A gasp escaped her, her fingers digging into the rug as the pleasure intensified. Her body convulsed, wave after wave of intense pleasure washing over her, each one stronger than the last, pushing her closer and closer to the edge. She was lost in the sensation, her mind a whirl of pure, unadulterated bliss. This was even better than she remembered. It was almost too much, yet she couldn’t bring herself to want it to stop.

Katherine’s eyes snapped open at the sound of the door creaking. The ghostly hands lingered for a moment, their touch now soothing. Then she felt them slowly dissipate, as if someone’s presence had forced them away.

Katherine looked up from the floor, staring at the door. There stood Ava, mouth agape, staring at her diminutive form drowning in oversized clothes. The irony wasn’t lost on her - she’d come to trap Maya, only to fall victim to the very spell she’d wanted to use against her. Here she was, naked, shrunken, with vulnerable feet exposed, and wrapped up like a little gift by the spell for Ava. She took a deep breath, not sure what was going to happen next or what the spell had in store for her next.

“What the hell, Katy? You... you just shrank! You’re like two feet tall!” Ava’s voice trembled with disbelief. “And your appearance is completely different! Your tits are huge! And your face…It’s like you’re someone else!”

Katherine’s heart raced. Of course Ava would notice - her natural form bore little resemblance to her enhanced self.

“I don’t know what happened,” Katherine managed, struggling to sit up in her with her heavy clothes now weighing her down.

“I don’t believe you!” Ava stepped closer, her eyes wide with anger. “You’re just like Maya. The same thing happens to her. She shrinks too!” A light went off in Ava’s head as she put everything together. “Wait a second. You sent me that email! You’ve been manipulating me this whole time! I thought we were friends!”

Katherine’s plan had been exposed, and now she was vulnerable in a way she hadn’t anticipated. She’d planned to guide Ava from the shadows, not reveal herself like this. The spell had other ideas, apparently.

“And I know your face! I’ve seen you on television before. You’re Maya’s rival. The one she hates so much. Katy isn;t even your real name!” Ava said, hurt in her voice from being manipulated.

“I don’t know what you are talking about,” Katherine lied, pulling her oversized blouse tighter around her shoulders. “You have to help me! Figure out why this happened!”

The younger woman’s lips curved into a predatory smile that sent chills down Katherine’s spine. “Oh, we’re going to figure out what happened,” Ava growled, stepping closer. “And you’re going to tell me everything. I can’t believe you manipulated me like this! I really thought we were friends. So now I want to know about you, this magic, and how Maya is wrapped up in all of this. And you’re going to tell me, whether you like it or not.”

Katherine tried to scramble backward in her oversized clothes, but she tangled herself in the fabric. Her newly shrunken frame struggled against the material that had fit perfectly just minutes ago.

“I really don’t know anything!” Katherine protested, cursing inwardly at how unconvincing she sounded.

Ava reached down and pinched Katherine’s butt through the oversized material, making her yelp. “Really? Because I’ve been watching Maya for weeks now, trying to figure out how to get those boots off. Then suddenly you show up, pretending to be sweet little Katy from accounting, and now here you are, shrinking just like Maya does. And you were always trying to get me to learn more, pushing me to look into Maya’s strange behavior. You were scheming this whole time!”

Katherine squirmed as Ava’s grip tightened around her. The spell had left her at Ava’s mercy, and she could still feel phantom tingles dancing across her skin where the ethereal hands had recently touched her. Her body was hypersensitive, and even Ava’s firm pinch had sent shivers of pleasure through her.

“Please,” Katherine whispered, genuine fear creeping into her voice.

She hadn’t planned for this at all. The spell had completely upended her careful manipulations, exposing her at the worst moment. Katherine’s heart raced as panic set in. She turned to flee, her bare feet padding against the cold floor, but the massive pile of her former clothing tangled around her ankles. She stumbled forward, arms spinning as she lost her balance.

“Oh no!” she yelped as she tumbled face-first onto the carpet. The fall left her exposed, diminutive form sprawled awkwardly on the ground.

Ava’s rich laughter filled the office. “Having some trouble there little one?”

Heat rushed to Katherine’s cheeks as she scrambled to her feet, darting toward the door. Her small hands grasped the handle, twisting desperately, but it wouldn’t budge. Locked.

“Come on, Katherine,” Ava called out, her voice thick with amusement. “Do you really want to run around the office nude at two feet tall? What if the cleaning crew sees you? Now get over here. We have things to discuss.”

Katherine pressed her back against the door, her hands once again trying to preserve what little modesty she could. She glanced at the windows showing the darkening city skyline, then back at Ava’s towering form. The reality of her situation sank in.

Katherine took hesitant steps toward Ava, her bare feet sinking into the carpet fibers. Each step made her increasingly aware of her new size - or lack thereof. Ava’s kneeling form towered over her like a goddess, making Katherine feel absolutely tiny in comparison.

“That’s it, come closer,” she teased, her voice carrying a dangerous edge that made Katherine shiver.

Katherine’s mind raced as she tried to process what had happened. This wasn’t right. This kind of transformation shouldn’t have been possible. The Spell of Domination’s weakness could only work when it was actively maintained, and Katherine knew she hadn’t cast it recently. She was in her natural form when the shrinking started. Yet here she stood, reduced to a little over two feet in height, completely vulnerable before Ava.

Without any warning, Ava suddenly reached forward and picked her up. It all happened so fast that Katherine was taken completely by surprise. Ava’s huge hands had closed around her waist and effortlessly swept her off her feet. Rising to her feet, she cupped Katherine’s behind with one arm and held the little auburn haired beauty against her breasts. Katherine struggled against her firm grip, her tiny hands pushing futilely against the giant fingers wrapped around her midsection. The indignity of being held like a baby by this meek secretary, completely naked and exposed, made her cheeks burn with humiliation.

“Let me go!” Katherine yelled, her voice sounding small even to her own ears. She twisted and squirmed, but Ava’s grasp remained unshakeable. Katherine stared up at Ava’s looming face, her heart pounding. Being held like this was utterly humiliating - her diminutive form completely at the mercy of someone who should have been her pawn.

“But Ava,” Katherine said, “I know nothing, this is crazy!” Her tiny voice quivered as she dangled in Ava’s grip, hating how unconvincing she sounded even to herself.

“Don’t lie to me, Katherine. I know you tampered with the door. And that anonymous email about Maya’s secret? That was you too, wasn’t it?” Ava’s other hand came up to stroke Katherine’s auburn hair, the gesture somehow both soothing and threatening. “Now, why don’t you start telling me the truth about this spell, and what you really want with Maya? Why were you manipulating me this whole time?”

“But Ava - “ Katherine cried, before being cut off.

A colossal finger pressed against Katherine’s mouth, cutting off her protests. “Shhhh,” Ava crooned with patronizing sweetness, treating her like a cranky toddler. “There’s no reason to be so difficult. You’ve been caught. You’re going to start from the beginning,” Ava commanded, her voice thundering from above. “Tell me everything about this spell and how you were involved in it.”

“You’re crazy,” Katherine shot back, struggling against the firm grip around her waist. “Let me go!”

The giantess’s gaze turned menacing as she glared down. “Katy, I won’t tolerate any more deception or manipulation of any kind. Do I make myself clear? I’m tired of being manipulated and talked down to by powerful women. It’s my turn to be in charge.”

“You’re making a huge mistake! I really don’t know anything,” Katherine protested, her tiny fists pounding against Ava’s fingers. “Stop acting crazy and put me down!”

“Ah, Katy. I had a feeling we’d end up here,” Ava remarked, her head swaying side to side. “I have to admit I wanted to do this with Maya, but you will be a nice appetizer before the main course.”

Before Katherine could respond, Ava’s hand came down sharply on her exposed backside. Katherine cried out, the sting radiating through her miniaturized form.

“When this punishment is over,” Ava declared firmly, “you will tell me everything. And if you’d prefer to avoid another spanking after this one is over, you’ll call me mistress from now on, little pet.” Ava emphasized her last point with another sharp smack against her upturned rear, making it clear that Katherine would face additional discipline unless she used the proper title of respect.

Katherine bit her lip, fighting back tears of frustration and pain. This wasn’t how things were supposed to go. She was meant to be the puppet master, not the puppet. Yet here she dangled, powerless in Ava’s grasp as she was spanked mercilessly, her carefully laid plans crumbling around her.

Katherine squirmed helplessly as Ava’s palm crashed down against her bare skin again and again. Each impact sent waves of stinging pain radiating through her diminutive form. The steady rhythm of smacks echoed through the office, punctuated by Katherine’s cries and yelps

“One... two... three...” Katherine tried counting the strikes at first, desperate to maintain some semblance of control. But the relentless assault on her tender cheeks soon overwhelmed her ability to keep track. The spanking continued well past ten strikes, each one seemingly harder than the last.

Ava’s massive hand felt like it covered Katherine’s entire backside with each strike. There was no escaping the punishment; no way to twist or turn to avoid the next smack. Her tiny fists beat uselessly against Ava’s fingers as she tried to free herself.

Katherine’s body betrayed her with each stinging slap. Though she twisted and struggled in Ava’s grip, warmth pooled between her legs. The humiliation of being spanked like a naughty child while completely naked only heightened her arousal.

“Are you ready to start being honest with me?” Ava’s voice boomed from above, punctuating the question with another firm swat.

“Please... stop,” Ava whimpered, but her body told a different story. Each impact sent dual waves of pain and pleasure coursing through her diminutive form. Her breasts bounced with each strike, nipples hardening despite her protests. The ethereal touches from earlier had left her hypersensitive, and now every strike seemed to feed directly into her arousal.

“You’re enjoying this, aren’t you?” Ava’s voice held a note of amused discovery. “Your tiny body is practically begging for more.”

Katherine burned with shame at being so exposed, so vulnerable. Yet she couldn’t deny the electric tension building within her. Each spank sent shivers of pleasure mingling with the sting, making her gasp and squirm for reasons beyond just pain.

“N-no,” Katherine lied, her voice breathy and unconvincing even to her own ears. But her body told the truth - she was dripping with arousal, her thighs slick with evidence of her enjoyment.

The next strike landed particularly hard, drawing a moan from Katherine that had nothing to do with pain. She pressed her thighs together, desperate to hide her growing excitement, but at her current size, nothing could be concealed from Ava’s scrutiny.

“Please, please, no more mistress! Release me please!” Katherine begged, squirming and writhing across Ava’s lap as she attempted to shield her throbbing backside from her colossal captor’s punishing palm. Her auburn hair fell in disarray around her face as she struggled.

“It doesn’t work that way,” Ava said firmly as she dealt another blistering blow. The sharp sound echoed through the room. “We’re finished when I’m finished. You were manipulating me, and now you need to be punished.”

“Ok! Ok! I’ll tell you everything!” Katherine sobbed, her voice cracking with desperation. “I promise!”

“Fine. But just to drive the message home,” Ava teased before administering one last scorching swat, before placing the weeping, diminutive woman on the floor with an unexpected tenderness.

Ava studied Katherine’s small form for several heartbeats before breaking the silence. “Will you be truthful going forward? No more lies?” She guided Katherine’s face upward with a single fingertip beneath her jaw, forcing their eyes to meet. Tears fell from Katherine’s eyes as she gave a meek nod of compliance.

“Good. Take a seat over there. I need to think for a moment. Then we’ll discuss exactly what you were attempting to accomplish.”

Katherine wavered briefly while taking in the immense office.

“Now!” Ava’s command thundered from above, causing Katherine to startle.

Wrapping her arms over her chastened rear defensively, Katherine darted towards the plush leather couch, her petite form trembling with each hurried step across the office floor.

Katherine’s heart raced as she sat naked on the couch, her bottom still stinging from Katherine’s firm discipline. After a few moments, a commanding voice echoed through the room, demanding answers about her plans.

“All right Katy. You’ll share every detail of your scheme and name any accomplices. If I sense even a hint of deception, you’ll find yourself back across my lap for another lesson.”

“I’m the one who sent you that message about Maya,” said Ava. “I’m her former boss - the one she used the spell against years ago. In exchange for letting me grow back, I taught her the spell and she has used it ever since.”

Katherine leaned back in her chair, meeting Ava’s wide-eyed stare with a calm smile.

“I’ve been watching Maya for years, waiting for the right moment,” Katherine explained. “When I saw you, I knew you’d be perfect to help bring her down a notch. The spell has a mind of its own, and somehow I knew you were the one who would do to Maya what she did to me.”

“But why me?” Ava asked.

“Because you remind me of myself and Maya before we discovered the spell, overlooked, underestimated. Maya needs to learn she can’t keep treating people like this.”

“How did you manage to stay hidden as Katy all this time?” Ava asked, leaning forward. “Maya never suspected?”

Katherine laughed softly. “The spell preserves your enhanced form’s age, but in our natural state, we look as young as when we first cast it. That’s why I looked like I was in my early twenties. Maya’s too caught up in her own power to notice her secretary pool carefully. Besides, some hair dye and contacts go a long way.”

“What exactly do you want me to do?”

“Simple. You’ve already figured out her weakness. Those boots protect her feet because tickling them triggers the spell’s shrinking. One solid tickle session and she’ll shrink down, completely at your mercy.” Katherine’s voice carried the weight of experience. “Just like she did to me years ago.”

“And you’re sure this will work?”

“Trust me, I’ve been on both sides of this spell. The tickling creates an overwhelming sensation. She’ll be helpless to stop it once you start.”

“And it just makes you have submissive desires? So it makes you crave it?”

Katherine leaned forward, her voice dropping to a knowing whisper. “Yes. The spell has a peculiar way of balancing things. The more dominant you become, the more intensely those submissive desires grow inside you. I felt it myself when Maya discovered my secret. Something about her… I knew she was the one who would make me submit. The spell... it creates these connections.”

“Then you believe she desires… this?” Ava motioned toward Katherine’s diminutive form.

A knowing smile spread across Katherine’s lips as she watched understanding dawn in Ava’s eyes. “Maya feels the same pull toward you now. Every time she catches you staring at her boots, it stirs something deep inside her. Those moments when your eyes linger - they’re driving her wild with need. She’s fighting it, of course. That’s why she’s been especially harsh lately, trying to reassert her dominance. But I guarantee you, when she’s alone at night in her bed, she’s thinking about you. About what it would feel like to be small and helpless in your hands.”

“Exquisite,” Ava purred seductively. “The great and powerful Maya yearns to become a helpless tiny plaything. And I bet she tries so hard to fight her desires.”

“The more cruelly she treats people, the stronger these urges become. It’s the spell’s way of maintaining balance. She has placed herself at the very top, which means her submissive desires must be absolutely overwhelming by now.”

“And what about you? Why are you in your enhanced form?” Ava’s eyes narrowed with curiosity.

Katherine let out a defeated sigh. “Honestly, I don’t know.”

“You don’t know?” Ava said. “I told you no more deception and what the punishment would be for that.”

Katherine shifted uncomfortably on the couch. “Honestly, I don’t know,” Katherine said, annoyed. “But if I had to guess, I think the spell wanted to punish me by giving me to you to punish me further.” She gestured at her feet. “Your feet are only susceptible to tickling and shrinking when you’re in your enhanced form. I think it wanted me to have that vulnerability with you. It has a mind of its own. It’s the price of getting all of its benefits, and it doesn’t like when you meddle in its plans.”

“Interesting.” Ava’s lips curved into a predatory smile. “So the spell gave you to me for punishment? Like you’re my present?”

“I guess,” Katherine muttered, her usual confidence wavering. She attempted to bargain, “But you could also just grow me back too. That’s another weakness. Once you've shrunk, only someone it has chosen can grow you back.”

“That’s fascinating and unbelievable. I wouldn’t have believed it if I hadn’t seen it with my own eyes.”

“So you’ll grow me back now?” Katherine said hopefully.

Not quite yet." She fixed Katherine with a stern look. “And you left out nothing?”

Katherine swallowed hard, knowing she was completely at Ava’s mercy. Katherine bristled at how Ava was talking to her, but now wasn’t the time to let her pride get the better of her. “Nothing, I promise. Everything was in that email except my role. And now you know who I really am.”


Katherine’s heart leaped into her throat as Ava’s hands swooped down and scooped her up without warning. The sudden elevation made her stomach lurch as she found herself cupped in Ava’s warm palms, her shrunken bottom cupped gently in one of her palms.

“You’re so light,” Ava teased, turning her hands to examine Katherine from different angles. “Hard to believe you were once such a strong, powerful woman.”

“Please be careful,” Katherine said, hating how small and uncertain her voice sounded. “Seriously, this isn’t like you Ava! Please let me grow back!”

Not quite yet." Ava’s said with a hint of playful malice. “You and Maya think because you’re rich and powerful you can just manipulate people. I think you need a lesson in humility, and clearly the spell agrees. Plus, seeing you so small like this, it does something to me. I don’t know if it’s the spell's influence, but…”

Katherine shivered as Ava held her aloft, those piercing eyes studying her diminutive form with predatory interest. The cool air against her bare skin reminded her of just how vulnerable she was in this state. Ava was completely in control.

“Now what to do with you,” Ava mused, a familiar glint in her eye that made Katherine’s stomach flutter. “I know you like being shrunk and pleasured. That was pretty obvious from that spanking session a few minutes ago.”

Katherine tried to maintain her composure despite her compromising position. “Grow me back!” she demanded, though her tiny voice carried little authority.

“Not quite yet. Now where were we?” Katherine purred, moving one of her hands towards Katherine’s tiny form.

Katherine gasped as Ava’s index finger pressed against her tender, supple breast. Then she let out another as Ava’s fingertip circled her sensitive nipple, sending a jolt of electricity through her. Clearly enjoying Katherine’s involuntary reaction, Ava let out a playful laugh. She tried to squirm, to pull away, but Ava’s grip remained firm.

“Wh-what in the world are you up to?” Katherine demanded out, grasping the massive finger between her palms and shoving it back. “I told you everything. Now it’s time you grow me back!”

“I think I’m checking out the goods. I never thought I’d have a shrunken amazonian CEO in the palm of my hand before. Especially one as beautiful as you. I’ve actually seen you on television before, you know. I always had a bit of a crush on you” Ava smiled as gently squeezed Katherine’s other pillowy breast, softly pulling, and delighting in its softness and the way her nipple had immediately stiffened at her touch.

“Goddamn it!” Katherine shrieked. “Will you just knock it off, you big pervert!”

Ava chuckled, “Don’t act like you didn’t come here to do exactly this same thing to Maya. If you’re calling me perverted, then you’re just as bad,” she teased with a playful wink.

Katherine fought back defiantly, kicking at Ava’s incoming digits, then punching and pushing against the giant fingers that insisted on fondling and toying with every one of her enhanced curves. Though she couldn’t possibly bring herself to admit it to Katherine, her body was literally aching for her attention. A soft moan escaped her lips, a sound she desperately tried to stifle but couldn’t quite contain. Each caress, every bounce and jiggle caused her nipples to send pulses of erotic pleasure surging through her entire body. Even as she struggled against Katherine’s playful assault, a part of her, a deep, hidden part, reveled in the attention.

“Oh, Ava you wicked, wonderful woman. The spell chose correctly again” she thought. “You have absolutely no idea what you’re doing to me. And I can’t wait until you do it to Maya too.”

Though she tried to maintain her composure, her body betrayed her with visible trembling. The more she resisted, the more frustrated she became with her own reactions, her face burning hot with anger and embarrassment. She refused to give Katherine the satisfaction of seeing how much the situation was affecting her, keeping her jaw clenched tight as she continued her stubborn defense.

“Are you having fun? Do you enjoy tormenting me like this?” the shrunken beauty shouted as she delivered a desperate kick at Ava’s breast, putting every ounce of her diminutive strength into the strike. The impact barely registered against the giantess’s soft flesh, serving only to make her massive breast bounce slightly, much to Katherine’s mounting frustration.

“Mhmm, actually yes, quite a lot! It’s even more fun than I expected!” Ava let out a playful laugh. “And it looks like you are too.”

Another cry escaped Katherine’s throat as the horny giantess’s fingers slid sensually across her delicate, diminutive ass. Ava’s hands shifted between soft strokes, light spanks, and teasing pinches. Her bottom was still stinging sharply from its earlier punishment, each nerve ending a constant reminder of Ava’s vicious punishment of her backside. The diminutive woman couldn’t suppress the shudders coursing through her small frame as the giantess’s hands also manipulated and caressed her shrunken bosom. She whimpered, her voice barely a squeak, as Ava continued to toy with her.

“You love this don’t you!” Ava teased.

Katherine shook her head defiantly. “Grow me back Ava! You’ve had your fun!” she yelled.

“You’re not very convincing. And remember, you have to call me mistress,” Ava teased with a wink.

A warm puff of air from Ava’s lips grazed her nipple, making Katherine squirm and cry out in pleasure. She tried desperately to compose herself, to regain some semblance of her former commanding presence, but at this size she was utterly powerless to resist. Her diminutive form shuddered violently as surges of pleasure consumed her. Though her green eyes flashed with defiance, her miniature body continued to tremble.

Ava’s touch lingered on Katherine’s hip, a possessive caress that sent a shiver down her spine. Despite the indignity of her situation, a familiar warmth continued to spread through her.

"You're quite the delightful package, Katy. So responsive, so... reactive," Ava whispered, her voice low and husky. With a swift motion, she flipped Katherine over, her small form cradled in Ava’s enormous hand. The world turned upside down, and Katherine found herself staring at the floor, her bare bottom once again exposed.

“This enhanced booty of yours is quite lovely,” Ava purred seductively, her fingers tracing the curve of Katherine’s rear. The touch sent a jolt of pleasure through her. She bit her lip, fighting the urge to squirm under Ava’s gaze. It was humiliating, yet undeniably arousing.

Ava kneaded her flesh, exploring the firmness of her buttocks with a knowing touch. Katherine’s breath hitched. It was as if Ava knew exactly where to touch, how much pressure to apply, to elicit the most intense reaction. A whimper escaped her lips, a sound she immediately regretted.

Ava chuckled, the sound vibrating against Katherine’s skin. “Such a sensitive little thing, aren’t you?”
Then, without warning, Ava took two fingers and softly spread Katherine's butt cheeks apart. The cool air of the room hit her sensitive exposed skin, making her gasp.

She felt utterly exposed, her most intimate areas on full display for Ava's amusement. "What are you..." Katherine began to protest, but her words were cut off by the sensation of Ava's warm breath blowing softly over that sensitive region between her cheeks.

The sudden warmth was both startling and arousing, causing her to let out another involuntary moan. She felt Ava’s hot breath caress her rear. A long, slow exhale that sent goosebumps rippling over her. Katherine gasped, her muscles tensing. The combination of the touch and the warm air against one of her most sensitive areas was overwhelming.

Ava laughed, the sound deep and throaty. "You like that, don't you?" she teased, her breath continuing to caress between Katherine's spread cheeks.
“Stop, it’s too much! Please, no more! Ohhhhh!” Katherine pleaded, squeezing her toned thighs together while squirming helplessly in Ava’s grasp. Her diminutive form trembled uncontrollably as waves of sensation overwhelmed her senses. The spell’s effects had heightened every touch to an almost unbearable degree, leaving her gasping and writhing. Her auburn hair clung damply to her forehead as she struggled against the overwhelming sensations coursing through her tiny frame.

"Please..." Katherine whispered, though she wasn't sure what she was asking for. More? Less? An end to this torment?

Ava paused, her fingers stilling on Katherine's hips. "Please what, Katy?" she asked, her voice laced with amusement. "What do you want from me?"
Katherine's mind raced. What did she want? She wanted to regain control, to return to her powerful, dominant self. Yet at the same time, she couldn't deny the thrill of being at Ava's mercy, the exhilarating rush of being so completely and utterly overwhelmed by pleasurable sensations.
Ava turned her onto her back once more, drinking in the sight of her chest.

“By the way, your breasts are absolutely perfect,” Ava purred, her voice dripping with a predatory satisfaction that made Katherine’s skin tingle. “So full and firm.”

She wanted to turn away, to hide herself from the scrutinizing gaze, but her body seemed to betray her with every passing moment, responding to each calculated caress with embarrassing sensitivity. Katherine could do nothing but softly moan and squirm helplessly as waves of pleasure from her sensitive breasts engulfed her. A surge of warmth flooded through her body, sending shivers across her flesh while her breathing grew shallow and ragged.

A delicate tremor ran through her as Katherine observed Ava move her hand downward, tracing her finger along her belly, tickling her belly button and inching toward her most intimate area, which was dripping with arousal. Anticipation coiled in her belly, a mixture of excitement and trepidation, as she wondered what Ava intended to do next. Would she actually touch her there? The thought alone sent another jolt of pleasure through her.

Katherine’s breath caught in her throat as she gazed up at Ava, a mixture of anticipation and trepidation coiling in her belly. “What... what are you doing now?” she whispered, hesitation coloring her words.

“Oh, nothing I think you won’t like. I’m just checking something,” Ava responded, her finger tracing a path between Katherine’s trembling legs. “You have such a gorgeous, little pussy” Ava purred. “I wonder what it feels like and how turned on you are right now. I just have to know!”

“Stop it!” Katherine gasped, swatting at the invasive finger as it pressed against her damp core. The shrunken beauty writhed and clenched her legs as firmly as possible, yet proved powerless to stop the massive finger’s determined journey towards her dripping wet coochie.

Katherine’s body trembled with need as Ava’s finger stopped and rested right above her most intimate spot, her arousal evident and impossible to hide. She bucked her hips involuntarily, desperate for something, anything, to relieve the tension building within her. The feeling was excruciating, yet thrilling, a terrifying blend of pleasure and panic. She fought against her own desires, torn between wanting more and maintaining some semblance of dignity.

“My, my! Someone’s quite aroused,” Ava teased, her tone rich with mockery.

The observation sent a wave of shame flooding through Katherine’s face. She couldn’t suppress the tiny moan that slipped from her throat, which only widened Ava’s patronizing grin. Katherine clenched her eyelids tight, humiliated by her physical response.

Ava then ran her finger over the front of Katherine’s wet snatch, the light touching a stark contrast to the intense pressure building within her. Katherine bucked her hips again, a desperate plea for more substantial contact. The feeling was excruciating. She yearned for Ava’s touch, craved the release that seemed just out of reach, but only the teasing continued, each stroke of Ava’s finger driving her further into a frenzy of desperate need. A whimper escaped her lips. She closed her eyes, trying to will herself to calm down, but her body throbbed with an undeniable, insistent ache.

Then suddenly, the warmth of Ava’s touch disappeared as she withdrew her finger. Katherine found herself being lowered, her tiny form deposited onto the smooth surface of Maya’s desk. The abrupt end to the intimate contact left her feeling oddly bereft and confused.

“What are you doing?” Katherine asked suspiciously, her voice unsteady as she tried to regain her composure while covering herself with her hands.

Ava’s lips curved into that infuriating smirk. “What? You said to stop,” she teased, leaning back in her chair. “So I stopped. I’ve had my fun and revenge, and I think you’ve learned your lesson. You said the spell gave you to me to punish you, so I punished you. Even though I think you loved every second of my ‘punishment’.”

Katherine sat there, naked and frustrated, her body still thrumming with unfulfilled desire. Ava’s sudden shift from passionate dominance to casual dismissal left her reeling, uncertain how to respond to this latest power play.

“So I guess I’ll grow you back now and you can head home,” Ava taunted.

Katherine’s body ached with unfulfilled desire as she stood exposed. At just over two feet tall, she felt every inch of her smallness next to Ava’s towering form.

“Unless you want to come home with me,” she teased, her voice rich with promise. “And continue where we left off. And then we can discuss helping you get revenge on Maya. This spell… I’ve never felt that way before. I never had the desire to take what I wanted like that. And with Maya, I have to do the same.”

“Yes,” said Katherine. “It brings out your innermost desires. It can’t make you do anything you don’t want to do, but it makes it hard to resist. And giving in feels so good.”

“So, you’ll come home with me? Continue our fun?” Ava teased while raising an eyebrow. “Don’t deny how badly you want it.”

Katherine stood on shaky legs, her diminutive form not even reaching Ava’s waist. Though exposed and powerless, an electric excitement rippled within her at the seductive offer. She couldn’t remember the last time she’d surrendered herself so completely. Far too many days had passed since she’d relinquished command of herself to another.

On trembling legs, Katherine managed a nod. Her pride warred with her desire, but in this moment, desire won.

“However,” Ava’s smile turned predatory, “you’re too big to sneak out of here. Give me those delicate little feet. I need to shrink you down to six inches.”

Heart racing, Katherine climbed onto the sleek leather office couch, her small frame sinking into the cushions. She stretched out and spread her legs, making her feet accessible for Ava’s touch, feeling vulnerable yet willing. The anticipation of what was to come - both the shrinking and whatever Ava had planned - made her breath catch in her throat. Her fingers gripped the armrest tightly, her knuckles whitening as she tried to steady her trembling form.

Ava’s fingers approached her sensitive soles, and Katherine braced herself for the inevitable surge of sensations that would reduce her even smaller.

Katherine’s world exploded in sensation as Ava’s fingers found her feet. Her diminutive form writhed on the leather couch, each stroke of Ava’s fingertips sending electric pulses through her body. The tickling sensation wasn’t just on her feet - it resonated through her entire body, mixing with waves of pleasure that made coherent thought impossible.

She felt herself shrinking, but the sensation blurred with the overwhelming ecstasy coursing through her. Her moans grew higher-pitched as her form dwindled, yet she couldn’t focus on her decreasing size. Every nerve ending sang with stimulation as Ava’sexpert touch reduced her further and further.

The leather beneath her seemed to expand, growing more vast with each passing second. Katherine’s body shuddered with multiple orgasms, her enhanced form making every sensation more intense as she continued to shrink. She lost all sense of scale, lost in a haze of pleasure and tickling sensations.

When Ava finally stopped, Katherine lay panting on the now-enormous couch. Looking up, she realized she was barely taller than Ava’s finger. The now loomed impossibly large around compared to her six-inch frame.

“It’s time to go home my pet,” Ava’s voice boomed from above, extending her palm.

Katherine’s tiny form trembled with aftershocks of pleasure as she looked up at her new mistress. “Yes mistress, but we’re going to my place” she managed to squeak, climbing onto Ava’s waiting hand.

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Katherine felt every subtle movement as Ava carried her through the penthouse apartment’s grand entrance. From her tiny perspective nestled in Ava’s warm palm, the familiar space took on new dimensions. The high ceilings soared like a cathedral, the modern art pieces loomed like billboards, and her carefully curated furniture resembled enormous sculptures.

“This place is incredible,” Ava’s voice boomed from above. Her free hand traced along the Italian marble countertops of Katherine’s designer kitchen. “I guess being the boss pays well.”

Katherine shivered, naked in Ava’s palm, her makeshift dress not enough to keep her warm on this chilly evening. The cold air raised goosebumps on her miniature form. She watched Ava’s face as the younger woman took in the floor-to-ceiling windows overlooking Central Park, the crystal chandelier casting rainbow prisms across the living room’s polished floors.

“The bedroom’s down that hall,” Katherine called up, her voice tiny but her intentions clear. She couldn’t help but notice how Ava’s eyes lit up at that suggestion. The gentle swaying motion as Ava walked made Katherine’s stomach flutter in anticipation of what was to come.

“Such a big bed for such a tiny thing,” Ava mused as they entered the master suite. She lowered her palm to the king-sized mattress, but didn’t release Katherine just yet.

Katherine’s heart raced as she looked up at Ava’s towering form. From six inches tall, the young secretary who had so thoroughly dominated her now seemed like a goddess, powerful and beautiful. Katherine had never felt more vulnerable, or more aroused, since her weekend with Maya.

Ava set her down on the nightstand, the polished surface cool beneath Katherine’s bare feet. “So, we’re finally here.”

“I guess we are.” Katherine crossed her arms, trying to maintain some dignity despite her diminutive size. “Only because I wanted to make sure Maya gets shrunk.”

A knowing smirk spread across Ava’s face as she leaned down, bringing her face close to Katherine’s level, her perfume enveloping her senses. “You don’t expect me to believe that Katy, do you?”

Heat crept up Katherine’s neck. “I-“

“You wanted this.” Ava’s voice dropped to a sultry purr. “You love being shrunk and pleasured and being submissive. Like you said, the spell just brings it out even more.”

Katherine’s shoulders slumped, her carefully maintained facade cracking. “Fine. Maybe I wanted this. But I didn’t think it would actually happen.” Ava’s laughter sent tremors through Katherine’s small body.

Katherine watched in rapt attention as Ava slipped out of her conservative work attire. The secretary’s movements were deliberate, teasing - so different from her usual shy demeanor at the office. This evening had brought out something new in her.

Her blazer dropped to the floor, followed by her cream silk blouse. From Katherine’s tiny vantage point, Ava’s natural beauty took on an almost mythic quality. Her pale skin glowed in the soft bedroom lighting. Though not as curvaceous as Katherine’s enhanced form, Ava’s figure was exquisite in its own right. Her perky B-cup breasts strained against a simple white bra before she unhooked it, letting it fall away. Her stomach was flat and toned, with just the slightest feminine softness around her hips.

Katherine felt her breath catch as Ava stepped out of her skirt. The young woman’s face held none of the uncertainty she showed at work. Her expression was confident, almost predatory. At around twenty-three, she had the fresh-faced beauty of youth combined with a growing sensual awareness that made Katherine’s tiny heart race.

Ava’s blonde hair fell in waves past her shoulders as she removed her hair tie, transforming her from efficient secretary to seductress. Her pretty features - high cheekbones, full lips, and bright eyes - took on a sultry cast as she gazed down at Katherine’s diminutive form.

Standing there in just her panties, Ava’s body was a study in gentle curves and smooth planes. Katherine had to admit, despite preferring her own amplified curves, there was something utterly captivating about Ava’s natural beauty. She was the perfect girl next door.

“Is this what you’ve wanted to see for all these months?” Ava’s voice, a teasing whisper, snapped Katherine out of her trance. “And at this size?” Ava’s eyes glittered with amusement, seeming to see right through her.

Ava stepped closer, her naked form looming over Katherine. The air stirred, carrying with it the scent of her perfume, warm and subtly sweet. Katherine felt dizzy, the world spinning around her. She reached out a hand, almost involuntarily, her fingers brushing against the smooth skin of Ava’s thigh. It felt like warm silk. She traced the curve of Ava’s hip, her touch light as a feather.

“Don’t be shy, Katy,” Ava murmured, her voice thick with amusement. “You can do more than look.” Her hand reached down, gently scooping Katherine up from the nightstand and onto the bed.

Her heart raced as Ava’s fingers gently enveloped her, lifting her up towards the lovely curves of her breasts. The sheer scale of her body was overwhelming, and Katherine couldn’t help but stare in awe at the pale, supple flesh that loomed before her.

“Don’t be shy,,” Ava purred, her voice low and sultry. “Take a closer look.”

Tentatively, Katherine reached out, her fingertips brushing against the soft skin. It was warm and velvety, and she marveled at the way the flesh seemed to yield to her touch. Glancing up, she saw Ava watching her intently, her lips turning into a coy smile.

“That’s it,” Ava encouraged, her breath tickling Katherine’s skin. “Explore to your heart’s content.”

Emboldened, Katherine let her hands roam, tracing the gentle curves and contours of Ava’s breasts. The sheer size of them was dizzying, and she found herself captivated by the way they moved and shifted with her every breath.

“You like what you see, don’t you?” Ava teased, her fingers trailing along Katherine’s back. “I can tell you’ve been wanting this for a long time.”

Katherine felt her face flush with heat, but she couldn’t deny the truth in her words. She had been fascinated by Ava’s body from the moment they had first met, and now, to be this close, to have the opportunity to touch and explore... It was overwhelming.

“Well, then,” Ava teased, her hand gently scooping up Katherine’s body. “It’s time to get a little more... intimate.”

Katherine’s breath caught in her throat as Ava began to undress her, peeling away the makeshift dress until she stood naked on the vast expanse of Ava's body. The sensation of the soft skin beneath her feet, the warmth of Ava’s breath on her skin, it was all too much, and Katherine felt a thrill of excitement and trepidation coursing through her.

Katherine steadied herself, her small hands pressed against the warm expanse of Ava’s skin. The world stretched vast around her, Kathrine’s bedroom ceiling soaring like a cathedral dome overhead. Her heart thundered in her chest. She loved how she felt, so exposed, so vulnerable. Completely at Ava’s mercy.

“Are you ready?” Her voice came out smaller than intended, barely a whisper.

Ava’s laugh rumbled through her body, sending tremors beneath Katherine’s feet. “Shouldn’t I be asking you that question?” Her finger traced along her spine, leaving goosebumps in its wake. “After all, this is your fantasy. You’re the one who wanted this. Deep down you knew your meddling would bring you here.”

Heat bloomed across Ava’s cheeks. The role reversal wasn’t lost on her. “You better not be like this with Maya when you have her like this.”

“Like what?” Ava asked with a smirk.

“So gentle. I want her spanked and chastened and dominated. I know she wants it too. She’ll love it” says Katherine petulantly.

“There’s no need for concern about that,” Ava replied with a knowing smile that made Katherine’s skin tingle. “Maya will get what she deserves - and what she wants, she added with a wink.”

Katherine’s heart pounded against her ribs as she stood before Ava, her body now a mere 6 inches tall. She gazed up in awe at the younger woman’s lovely figure, her eyes drawn inexorably to Ava’s perky breasts just mere inches away, which now seemed as imposing as twin mountains from her diminished perspective.

“I... I’m ready,” Katherine said, her voice high-pitched and trembling, hating how uncertain she sounded compared to her usual commanding tone.

Ava’s eyes sparkled with amusement. “Look at you, trying to be so brave.” Her finger traced the curve of Ava’s hip. “Still playing the CEO even when you’re small enough to fit in my palm.”

Ava’s ruby lips curved into a self-satisfied smirk, her perfectly made-up face looming above like that of a goddess. “I knew you wanted this the whole time, Katy. As soon as I saw how you responded to my spankings, I knew you wanted this.” She leaned forward, her breasts swaying tantalizingly close. You just needed a little push."

Ava felt heat rise to her cheeks, both from annoyance and undeniable arousal. Her pride warred with her desires as she stood there, barely taller than Ava’s finger. “Don’t gloat,” she huffed, even as her eyes hungrily drank in the sight before her.

“See something you like?” Ava’s voice rumbled from above, rich with amusement. “They’re quite different from down there, aren’t they?”

“Go ahead,” Ava purred, her voice rich and deep from above. “Touch them. I know you want to.”

Katherine’s breath caught in her throat. At her diminutive size, each step forward felt momentous, like approaching a magnificent monument.

Her tiny hands pressed tentatively against Ava’s breasts, feeling almost weightless against the vast expanse before her. The warmth of Ava’s skin radiated like a comforting blanket, and Katherine felt the gentle rise and fall of her breathing, each movement creating subtle shifts in the landscape around her.

“They’re so...” Katherine's mind fumbled for words, all her usual analytical detachment deserting her.

“Different from this perspective?” Ava shifted slightly, causing her breasts to jiggle. The movement nearly knocked Katherine off balance. “You’re adorable when you’re flustered, Katy”

Katherine pressed both palms flat against her breasts, feeling the firm weight beneath. Her fingers splayed wide, yet could barely cover a fraction of what she touched.

“I never imagined it would be me with you like this three weeks ago. It was supposed to be Maya…” Katherine’s voice trailed off as Ava leaned forward slightly, bringing more of herself within reach. The motion made Katherine’s head spin, her world tilting as those magnificent curves dominated her field of vision.

“Oh, I think you did imagine this,” Ava’s tone dripped with satisfaction. “Many times.”

“Okay maybe I did”, admits Katherine. “With the spell, you just can’t help it.”

Katherine felt a thrill of anticipation as Ava gently lifted her into the air, bringing her closer. Despite the warmth of Ava’s breath, Katherine found herself shivering slightly, her body tingling with expectation.

Ava delicately cradled Katherine in her hands, bringing her close with utmost care. She held her gently, treating her diminutive form like a precious treasure. The warmth of Ava’s breath washed over Katherine, making her feel dizzy with the sheer scale of their size difference.

Katherine trembled as Ava’s careful attention made her acutely aware of her vulnerability. She quivered slightly in her secure grasp, overwhelmed by pleasurable sensations. Ava effortlessly spread Katherine’s legs apart. Then, she tenderly brought the tip of her tongue into contact with Katherine’s shrunken pussy, causing her to gasp audibly. After lingering there for a few seconds, she ran her tongue over every inch of Katherine’s naked and exposed body, before bringing back to her groin. The feeling of it against her soft skin was both rough and exciting. The sensations were so intense, so overwhelming at her diminutive size, that she could barely process them.

However, at her miniature scale, the massive tongue proved far too imprecise to deliver the delicate touch Katherine desperately yearned for.

Ava’s tongue felt enormous against her shrunken form. Pleasurable, yes, but... lacking. It was like trying to scratch an itch with a feather duster. She needed something more, something precise. She squirmed in Ava’s grasp, a frustrated whimper escaping her lips.

“Mmm, enjoying this, are we?” Ava chuckled, her warm breath tickling Katherine's skin.

Ava could only nod, her tiny head bobbing against Ava’s palm. More. She craved a focused intensity that Ava’s large tongue simply couldn’t provide. She needed friction, pressure, a pinpoint touch that could send her spiraling.

Katherine squirmed against Ava’s tongue, the sensations overwhelming yet somehow not enough. “Stop,” she called out, her tiny voice barely audible.

Ava immediately pulled back, concern on her face. “What’s wrong?”

“Please, go to my top drawer and get out that box.” Katherine’s heart raced as she watched Ava gently place her on the bed.

The loss of contact left Katherine aching, her miniature body tingling with need as she watched Ava cross the room. The secretary’s graceful movements made her seem even more imposing from this perspective.

Ava opened the drawer and lifted out a small ornate box. Inside, nestled in velvet, lay an array of perfectly crafted toys, each sized specifically for a shrunken woman.

“Grab the purple one,” Katherine directed, her cheeks flushing. The toy in question was sleek, dark purple, and undeniably phallic. At her current size, it seemed almost obscene in its miniature perfection, yet it was exactly what she needed.

“Oh my, you naughty girl.” Ava’s eyes sparkled with delight as she lifted the toy. “This isn’t the first time you’ve done this.”

Katherine felt her face burn hotter. “Well, the spell gives me needs,” she mumbled, avoiding Ava’s knowing gaze. “I can’t help it.”

“Can’t help it?” Ava teased, twirling the tiny toy between her fingers. “Or don’t want to help it? How many times have you used this little collection of yours?”

“Just a few times,” Katherine insisted, her tiny voice barely carrying across the vast expanse of the bed.

Ava laughed. She held up the box, examining the collection of perfectly crafted miniature toys with obvious amusement. “A few times? This is quite the investment for ‘just a few times,’ Katy.” Her finger traced over the velvet lining, touching each meticulously crafted piece. “Custom made, I assume? These must have cost a fortune.”

Heat bloomed across Katherine’s cheeks. She watched as Ava’s fingers danced over her secret collection - vibrators, dildos, and other implements, each sized precisely for a six-inch woman. The craftsmanship was undeniable, the attention to detail exquisite.

“You naughty girl,” Ava teased, her voice dropping to a sultry purr. She plucked out another toy, this one in shimmering gold. “Look at this one - it even has little jewels embedded in it.” She turned it in the light, making the gems sparkle. “This isn’t the kind of thing someone gets for ‘just a few times.’”

Katherine wanted to sink into the bedspread. Her carefully maintained image as the powerful CEO was crumbling under Ava’s playful scrutiny. The truth was, she’d commissioned these toys years ago, unable to resist the allure of being small, of surrendering control. The spell had awakened something in her that she couldn’t deny, no matter how much she tried to maintain her dignified facade.

“Well,” she managed, trying to salvage some pride, “a girl has to be prepared.”

Ava returned, holding something small and gleaming between her thumb and forefinger. As she brought it closer, Katherine’s breath hitched. It was the purple one. Sleek, dark purple, and undeniably phallic, it seemed almost obscene in its miniature perfection. It was the exact size and shape she had craved just moments before.

“I love that you had this specially made,” Ava purred, her voice laced with amusement. She lowered the dildo towards Ava, the tip hovering tantalizingly close.

Katherine’s body thrummed with anticipation. She reached out a trembling hand, her fingers brushing against the smooth, cool surface. It was firm yet yielding, promising a level of intensity she could only dream of at her normal size. She closed her eyes, a wave of heat washing over her as she imagined what was to come.

Ava, after seating herself, gently grabbed Katherine and set her down on the bed.

“Stretch out for me,” she whispered. “Spread those legs nice and wide.”

Once Ava had eagerly complied, Ava pressed down on her lightly with her finger, pinning her to the bed. Using her pinky, she began to pleasure the tiny woman. Circular motions, slow and deliberate, teasing Katherine’s now swollen clit. Each touch sent jolts of electricity through her miniature form. The sensation, magnified by her reduced size, was almost overwhelming. She gasped, her tiny body writhing beneath Ava’s touch.

This, however, was merely a prelude. With Katherine still pinned, Ava took the tiny dildo and placed it softly in Katherine’s mouth.

“Make it nice and wet for me, darling,” Ava teased, her voice a low rumble.

Katherine, caught between a blush and a thrill, obediently swirled the dildo around her tongue, coating it with saliva. The absurdity of the situation, combined with the undeniable pleasure, made her giggle. A high-pitched, breathy sound that echoed in the vastness of the room.

Ava retrieved the now glistening dildo and gently positioned the tip against the increasingly wet and swollen entryway of Katherine’s tiny pussy. Though the dildo was tiny to someone of Ava’s size, it was massive for Katherine. A moan escaped her lips, a tiny, breathy sound lost in the scale of the room. She squeaked in pleasure as Ava slowly worked the toy into her minuscule sex.

The initial sting of the stretch gave way to a feeling of fullness, a sensation so intense it made her head spin. Katherine arched her back involuntarily as Ava continued to push the dildo deeper. Each thrust brought a wave of dizzying pleasure, washing over her in rhythmic pulses. She felt utterly exposed, vulnerable, and yet undeniably aroused.

A sharp intake of breath. A moment of intense pressure. Then, a slow burn of pleasure spread through Katherine’s tiny body. Ava began to move the dildo with a practiced hand, each stroke sending waves of sensation through her. Despite the initial discomfort, a wave of heat quickly followed, building with each thrust. With a gentle precision, Ava used the tiny sex toy on Katherine, her rhythm steady and controlled. Her delicate fingers clutched at the bed sheets as if she was holding on for dear life, her grip tightening until her knuckles blanched. She gasped for breath as Ava drove her wild, her tiny body arching and bucking against the rhythmic movements, matching Ava’s rhythm.

The rhythmic pulsing escalated, a crescendo of sensation building within her. It tightened, coiled, then burst forth in a wave of pure, unadulterated pleasure as she had the best orgasm of her life. Katherine cried out, a tiny, high-pitched sound that was swallowed by the vastness of her bedroom.

Ava watched with a satisfied smirk, her eyes gleaming with amusement. “Not so bad, was it, Katy?” she teased, her voice a low purr.

Katherine, still catching her breath, could only manage a weak nod. It had been… extraordinary. Humiliating to be in this scenario considering this is what she envisioned for Maya, perhaps, but undeniably the most intense orgasm of her life. The sheer scale of the sensations, amplified by her shrunken form, had been overwhelming. She had never felt so vulnerable, so completely at someone’s mercy, and yet… the pleasure had been intoxicating.

“Now,” Ava continued, her voice taking on a playful lilt, “I’ve pleasured you. Why don’t you pleasure me?” She jiggled her breasts, the movement sending ripples through the silk of her blouse. “Start by worshipping these tits you love so much.”

Katherine giggled, the sound high-pitched and slightly breathless. The power dynamic had shifted yet again. From dominant CEO to shrunken plaything, and now… a tiny devotee at the altar of Ava. The thought sent a thrill through her, a mix of excitement and nervous anticipation. She pushed herself up, her tiny legs still shaky from the aftershocks of her orgasm.

The sight of Ava’s breasts from this perspective was still overwhelming. Two massive mounds of flesh, each one larger than her entire body. They loomed before her, soft and inviting, the peaks tipped with rosy nipples that seemed to beckon her closer. She took a tentative step forward, then another, her tiny feet padding softly against the bedspread. As she drew nearer, the scent of Ava’s perfume and arousal filled her senses, a heady mix of floral and musk that made her head spin. She reached out a trembling hand, her fingers brushing against the warm, silken skin.

“You’d be surprised what I can do with these tiny hands. I can give a giantess like you the best orgasm of her life. It will be so good you’ll be at my mercy even though I’m tiny. Once I start, you’ll be putty in my hands, regardless of our size difference. A shrunken lioness’s claws and teeth are still sharp. Just because I’ve been reduced doesn’t mean I’ve lost my predatory nature - my bite is still just as fierce,” Katherine teased.

“I’m eager to find out, my fierce little kitten,” Ava purrs.

Katherine pulled back from Ava, her tiny form still tingling from their intimate encounter. Despite her diminutive size, her CEO instincts kicked in - there were important matters to discuss.

“What’s the matter? Why did you stop?” Ava exclaimed. “Don’t leave me hanging, little one. I hope you aren’t playing one of your tricks.”

“Before we continue, we need to talk about Maya and her imminent downfall,” Katherine said, settling herself cross-legged on the bed. “You’re probably wondering why she hasn’t fired you yet.”

Ava’s brow furrowed. “I have been curious. She’s caught me staring at her feet multiple times. She’s obviously suspicious.”

“It’s the spell,” Katherine explained, a knowing smile playing across her tiny features. “Maya could easily dismiss you, transfer you, or find some excuse to get rid of you. She’s the CEO, so she has that power. But she can’t bring herself to do it.”

Katherine shifted, remembering her own experiences with the spell’s influence. “The spell doesn’t just enhance our physical forms. It creates... desires. Needs. The more you use it, the more it affects you psychologically. Maya wants to be discovered, to be dominated. She craves it, even if she won’t admit it to herself.”

“Every time she catches you looking at her feet, every time she sees that knowing glint in your eye - it excites her. The spell is working its magic on her mind just as it did on mine years ago. She’s fighting it, of course. Maya’s pride won’t let her surrender easily. But deep down, she wants you to figure it out. To take control.”

Katherine laughed softly, the sound barely audible at her current size. “That’s why she keeps you around, despite the risk. The spell won’t let her do otherwise. It’s pushing her toward her inevitable fate, just as it did with me.”

Katherine shifted her tiny form on the bed, a knowing smirk playing across her diminutive features. “One thing’s certain - Maya’s going to have many restless nights ahead of her. That lusty amazon won’t know what to do with herself.”

She recalled her own experiences with the spell’s effects, how it had twisted her desires and made her hyper-aware of every glance, every subtle interaction. “Just catching you staring at her feet is probably driving her wild right now. The spell heightens everything - every sensation, every emotion. She’s probably lying in bed at night, tossing and turning, wondering if you know her secret.”

Katherine let out a soft laugh, remembering the torturous anticipation she’d experienced when Maya had been in Ava’s position. “She’ll try to act tough during the day, but at night? That’s when the spell really works its magic. Every time you’ve looked at her boots, every knowing glance you’ve given her - it’s all playing on repeat in her mind. She’s probably touching herself right now, imagining what it would be like to be at your mercy.”

She ran her tiny hand through her hair, amused by the irony of it all. “The spell makes sure of that. It’s funny how it works - the more she fights against these desires, the stronger they become. And Maya, with all her pride and power? She’s fighting it harder than anyone, which only makes the effect more intense.”

“That’s absolutely delicious,” Ava purred. “I’m loving the thought of her writhing in pleasure as she fights her desires, especially considering how she behaved toward me. I’m looking forward to making her pay.”

Katherine adjusted her position on the bed, her tiny form shifting as she considered Ava’s aggressive approach. “However, you’re going about this all wrong,” she explained, drawing from her experience as both predator and prey. “Maya’s like a skittish deer - come on too strong and she’ll bolt.”

She thought back to her own encounters with the spell, how the subtle dance of power had played out. “The key is to let her come to you, to plant the seeds in her mind and let them grow. Make her think it’s her idea.”

Katherine gestured with her diminutive hands as she outlined her strategy. “Start with subtle teases. When she’s berating you about some minor mistake, just give her this knowing little smile. Or when she’s adjusting those boots of hers, make an offhand comment about how protective she is of them.”

“The spell makes her hyper-aware of these hints,” Katherine continued. “Each one will stick in her mind, playing over and over. She’ll start second-guessing herself, wondering if you know something.”

She remembered vividly how Maya had played this exact psychological game with her years ago, the memories still sharp and pointed like needles in her mind. “Drop something cryptic occasionally, but make it seem natural,” Katherine advised. “Perhaps remark how appearances can be deceiving, or suggesting those boots make her so tall it’s practically supernatural. Or slip in an innocent observation about sensitive soles during a marketing discussion and watch her squirm.”

“Trust me,” Katherine said with a knowing smile, “she’ll start creating opportunities to be alone with you. She won’t even realize she’s doing it. The spell will make sure of that. And when that moment comes...” She trailed off, leaving the implication hanging in the air.

“Remember, the best predators are patient. They let their prey come to them.”

“Now, where were we,” said Katherine as she stood up on the bed. “I think I was about to make you my submissive little toy.”

“Were you now?” laughed Ava. “I’d like to see you try, little one.”

“Just wait,” says Katherine. She took a tentative step forward, then another, her tiny feet padding softly against bedspread as she headed towards her pussy. The closer she got, the more Ava’s aroma—a dizzying mix of blossoms and something musky—overwhelmed her. With a shaky hand, she extended her fingers, grazing her lover’s heated, smooth flesh.

“Get ready for the best night of your life.”

[Aboutthesizeofit]

Nice work!
I'm really enjoying your story so far, but wanted to give a little bit of quick feedback. There are a few moments where I think you are crediting the wrong character with a quote, specifically a few moments where you have Katy credited with a quote that seems to actually be Ava speaking to Katy.
On another note, tickling is something I enjoy almost as much as shrinking, so I personally would enjoy it if the tickling scene towards the end of the first part was expanded a bit and focused on more. But that's more of a personal preference of mine, I just enjoy the idea of shrinking caused by tickling quite a bit.
All together I really like your story, so much so that I made an account to give some feedback lol. I think you've done a nice job building some suspense here and I'm eagerly anticipating Maya being shrunk.

[Bendo]

I loved the surprising shrinking of Katherine, the description of her shrinking and feeling. What a cute but well deserved drama! I loved her beautiful 2 feet shrunken size and the interaction with Ava. Also it was very good how Ava showed her cleverness by analysing and unmask Katherine's role. Then there comes another shrinking and more lovely interaction. A perfect chapter.

[coolcommenter]

Just made this account to give you feedback. I like it so far! I'd like another chapter from Maya to see what she knows. At this point it's pretty vague. Maybe we could get an update from her at this point?

[bigguy123456789]

Just made this account to give you feedback. I like it so far! I'd like another chapter from Maya to see what she knows. At this point it's pretty vague. Maybe we could get an update from her at this point?

I just made a chapter from Maya's POV actually. Let me know what you think!

[Captain Ash]

The spell cleverly manipulated Katherine, playing her right into Ava's hands.
Despite Katherine's plan backfired in the most unexpected way, ultimately working to her own advantage.
The sex scenes are described sensually, and for me it could work as well that Ava end up with Kathrine instead of taking her revenge with Maya.
Katherine expertly couches Ava as a tiny advisor, using subtle cues and manipulation to control the situation. This adds a kind of tension and suspense to the story.
Which makes me wonder, could Ava also learn the spells from Katherine? Or would the whimsical ways of the spell forbid it?

I've also found some negative points, which I will send seperately via a private message.

[sallyfourth]

Hi;

This is very, very well executed. So far anyway I've only had time to get through the first half of the first bit of the thread. One thing I did feel was worth mentioning. Just about the middle of that post you have the magically miniaturized Kathleen being picked up and held by Ava, fine. Just a few short paragraphs later, Ava begins spanking her as though Ava was seated and Kathleen was draped across her lap.

In most cases this sort of minor omission is meaningless. It would be an unnecessary detail, that the reader should be able to understand than Ava has taken a seat and arranged Kathleen across her lap. But you cannot do omit this detail in a spanking scene.

No sir, this cannot stand. There are protocols that must be observed. Consider, there are good reasons that a fine restaurant doesn't serve your steak on a cold plate.

You may need nothing more than a single paragraph, though I would give it at least two, for Ava to be seated and Kathleen properly "plated". Consider the POV, Think about Kathleen's reaction when she finds herself in this position Ava's perspective and how she might toy with Kathleen a bit. Show us this image.

If you like, you could probably work these details into existing paragraphs. In any case, please consider this suggestion.

Seeya!

[bigguy123456789]

Hi;

This is very, very well executed. So far anyway I've only had time to get through the first half of the first bit of the thread. One thing I did feel was worth mentioning. Just about the middle of that post you have the magically miniaturized Kathleen being picked up and held by Ava, fine. Just a few short paragraphs later, Ava begins spanking her as though Ava was seated and Kathleen was draped across her lap.

In most cases this sort of minor omission is meaningless. It would be an unnecessary detail, that the reader should be able to understand than Ava has taken a seat and arranged Kathleen across her lap. But you cannot do omit this detail in a spanking scene.

No sir, this cannot stand. There are protocols that must be observed. Consider, there are good reasons that a fine restaurant doesn't serve your steak on a cold plate.

You may need nothing more than a single paragraph, though I would give it at least two, for Ava to be seated and Kathleen properly "plated". Consider the POV, Think about Kathleen's reaction when she finds herself in this position Ava's perspective and how she might toy with Kathleen a bit. Show us this image.

If you like, you could probably work these details into existing paragraphs. In any case, please consider this suggestion.

Seeya!

Thanks for taking the time to read it and give feedback! I based that part on My Mini Jenny (which is my favorite story of yours) so I’ll definitely take your advice. Hopefully it’s not too similar. I tried to recreate that vibe while incorporating it into my story, but I suck at writing so hopefully the execution isn’t too terrible and derivative. I know this needs a ton of editing still so there definitely will be changes!

[sallyfourth]

Thanks for taking the time to read it and give feedback! I based that part on My Mini Jenny (which is my favorite story of yours) so I’ll definitely take your advice. Hopefully it’s not too similar. I tried to recreate that vibe while incorporating it into my story, but I suck at writing so hopefully the execution isn’t too terrible and derivative. I know this needs a ton of editing still so there definitely will be changes!

I'm glad that my feedback was received in the tongue-in-cheek manner that I intended. I really didn't feel that it was terribly similar to My Mini Jenny, so no problem there I think. I didn't go back to compare. But I do think you want Ava to put Katherine on her lap. And Katherine hould try to scramble free and be prevented or try to negotiate. Either way you have a great opportunity to show how the new power dynamic has changed things for both Ava and Katherine. Could Ava also pinch or flick Kathleen's"s little buns? Be creative.

Seeya

[bigguy123456789]

Thanks for taking the time to read it and give feedback! I based that part on My Mini Jenny (which is my favorite story of yours) so I’ll definitely take your advice. Hopefully it’s not too similar. I tried to recreate that vibe while incorporating it into my story, but I suck at writing so hopefully the execution isn’t too terrible and derivative. I know this needs a ton of editing still so there definitely will be changes!

I'm glad that my feedback was received in the tongue-in-cheek manner that I intended. I really didn't feel that it was terribly similar to My Mini Jenny, so no problem there I think. I didn't go back to compare. But I do think you want Ava to put Katherine on her lap. And Katherine hould try to scramble free and be prevented or try to negotiate. Either way you have a great opportunity to show how the new power dynamic has changed things for both Ava and Katherine. Could Ava also pinch or flick Kathleen's"s little buns? Be creative.

Seeya

I love all those ideas! And I think they will apply well to Maya too!

[bigguy123456789]

Thanks for taking the time to read it and give feedback! I based that part on My Mini Jenny (which is my favorite story of yours) so I’ll definitely take your advice. Hopefully it’s not too similar. I tried to recreate that vibe while incorporating it into my story, but I suck at writing so hopefully the execution isn’t too terrible and derivative. I know this needs a ton of editing still so there definitely will be changes!

I'm glad that my feedback was received in the tongue-in-cheek manner that I intended. I really didn't feel that it was terribly similar to My Mini Jenny, so no problem there I think. I didn't go back to compare. But I do think you want Ava to put Katherine on her lap. And Katherine hould try to scramble free and be prevented or try to negotiate. Either way you have a great opportunity to show how the new power dynamic has changed things for both Ava and Katherine. Could Ava also pinch or flick Kathleen's"s little buns? Be creative.

Seeya

If you want, you can write a chapter! Actually, in the next chapter Maya finally gets shrunk so you could have her pinch and flick both of their buns! Just saying lol.

[sallyfourth]

Hi,

Honestly, I'm a bit busy with Trophy Wife and a half dozen other stories. And remember how the Star Wars sequel trilogy turned out. JJ sets up Snook as the Big Bad, Mr Bubblehead kills off the Big Bad in the middle of episode 2 and what's JJ''s solution? "Somehow Palpatine has returned!" What utter excrement. Multiple authors is almost always a truly terrible idea.

Seeya

[bigguy123456789]

Hi,

Honestly, I'm a bit busy with Trophy Wife and a half dozen other stories. And remember how the Star Wars sequel trilogy turned out. JJ sets up Snook as the Big Bad, Mr Bubblehead kills off the Big Bad in the middle of episode 2 and what's JJ''s solution? "Somehow Palpatine has returned!" What utter excrement. Multiple authors is almost always a truly terrible idea.

Seeya

Not in this case when one person is way more talented than the other! But I was just kidding. I know you are busy. But I'm going to be traveling for the next 3 weeks so if you change your mind...