OK, after a lot of work, I finally have a story that I am happy with. Please note that this is a human/AI collaboration and, even with some extra editing by me, it may still be a bit rough. Any suggestions/edits you guys would like to make, I would be more than happy to take them on board. Either way I hope you enjoy the story and I look forward to any and all feedback.
Edit: I moved this story out of the Requests Forum, as I realise its subject matter makes it fit better here instead.
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Lara the Doll-sized Babysitter
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Re: Lara the Doll-sized Babysitter
Whilst in the story Lara has shorter and slightly darker hair and isn't wearing glasses, this is still pretty much how Lara looks in the story
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An all-time favorite of mine!
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Re: Lara the Doll-sized Babysitter
Both and in the case of your story, all the more so as she is a hottie to be sure! I admit, her discovery by the boy in your first version was a bit more fun as he got to surprise and undress his new toy. Always such fun!
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Re: Lara the Doll-sized Babysitter
what AI program did you useAussie_Lurker wrote: ↑Mon Jul 08, 2024 10:01 amAll-time favourite storyline, or all-time favourite shrunken woman?. Either way I am so glad you enjoyed it. It was fun guiding the AI in the creation of the story.
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It's called Wilfie.native89 wrote: ↑Fri Jul 12, 2024 2:53 pmwhat AI program did you useAussie_Lurker wrote: ↑Mon Jul 08, 2024 10:01 amAll-time favourite storyline, or all-time favourite shrunken woman?
https://wilfie.ai/
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Re: Lara the Doll-sized Babysitter
OK guys, using the same AI program again, I have created an updated version of the original story. As much as I liked the original story, I felt it was lacking something-primarily extra dialogue and inner monologues. So I have endeavoured to add that this time around. I would definitely love to hear what you all think of the new version....both good and bad.
Oh, and an extra picture to go with it to help you imagine the subject of the story.....with the same caveats as before
Oh, and an extra picture to go with it to help you imagine the subject of the story.....with the same caveats as before
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WOW on both counts. What a perfect plaything.
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Very much so. I still think the first account of their primary encounter is the best.
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