The Tourists. M(teen)/f

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Re: The Tourists. M(teen)/f

Post by SciFiCrazy » Fri Sep 18, 2020 4:22 pm

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Post by SciFiCrazy » Mon Sep 21, 2020 6:41 pm

Hoping we get to hear about the port visit. Wanna see some more newbies and how when they come back on and get rummaged through for credits or non keepers.
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Post by HHunter1 » Tue Sep 22, 2020 3:44 am

SciFiCrazy: I have the Cruise story completed besides additional editing. I gloss over that aspect, but hadn't put much into it's detailing. I will have to note that in the chapters Karla is privy to such events. Maybe it could be bumped up a bit. I will see. Glad your enjoying the story.

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Re: The Tourists. M(teen)/f

Post by SciFiCrazy » Fri Sep 25, 2020 7:18 am

Liked the upsizing to get some additional enjoyment. Also the collars that allowed the upsizing and their security features are a nice invention. As always, looking forward to the next chapter.
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Post by frollo » Fri Sep 25, 2020 11:20 pm

I now one can dream , but this should be made into a movie :) . Or tv series! Interesting characters , setting and story arch.
A real pleasure to read , thank you !
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Post by HHunter1 » Sat Sep 26, 2020 12:05 am

Well, thanks guys. I will keep posting chapters Mondays and Thursdays till I run out. If it helps I've included a self modified version of the image that inspired the story. I'll be honest, this model is the subject of a few of my sw stories. :P Sorry about the bad photo shopping/cartoony hand. But I hope it illustrates the idea well enough.
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Post by SciFiCrazy » Sat Sep 26, 2020 3:36 am

Can definitely see this girl as Karla if she was a bit older. Almost feel like it’s exactly how I imagined her looking from your ability to write right into our imaginations.
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Post by SciFiCrazy » Tue Sep 29, 2020 11:25 pm

Crime doesn’t pay. But the criminals sure will...lol
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Post by SciFiCrazy » Thu Oct 01, 2020 7:47 pm

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Post by SciFiCrazy » Mon Oct 05, 2020 9:01 pm

Thought the mention of buying so many condoms to prevent mini pregnancies for years before being told it was pointless was hilarious. Liked that their shrinking methods can change certain unwanted or unsightly aspects of the mini’s. Looking forward to your next addition to the story.
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Post by HHunter1 » Tue Oct 06, 2020 4:45 am

Some of that is whimsy some is to cover my laziness. Glad your enjoying. More will be coming. Thanks again for your support.

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Post by SciFiCrazy » Sat Oct 10, 2020 5:59 am

Nice ass blasting scene at the end. Lol
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Post by anaio10 » Sun Oct 25, 2020 11:22 am

Nice continuations of the story.
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Post by Bobascher » Sun Oct 25, 2020 2:10 pm

I am curious if Karla’s aunt will reappear. I thought she might have been a birthday gift. Seeing how Karla would direct Michael to play with her would be very interesting
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Re: The Tourists. M(teen)/f

Post by HHunter1 » Sun Oct 25, 2020 2:54 pm

anaio10, I'm glad your enjoying it.

Bobascher, As a fan of your work I'm glad to know your reading my story. Hope this doesn't spoil things for you (Or any other reader) but Micheal doesn't get or plays with Karla's Aunt. Karla and her Aunt are never played with at the same time. Sorry. Though you are right, that would have been interesting. Little sad I didn't do that now. :)

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