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I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I was going for excited teen boy, being a few years removed from that I hope it came across as my intent.
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That was pretty good and i know what I said before but I am really liking this whole pet/toy relationship that micheal has going on with his shrunken, he might actually be starting to at least roughly care for them.
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Another great chapter, loved it
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I'm glad I'm able to entertain you with my little stories. Hope I can continue to do so in the future.
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Ok so as I have said before I am enjoying this story but man karla’s decent is very hard to read sometimes. Like really Karla putting them in the gerbils ugh , I can stand ( barely) that with micheal, but Karla stop. Like this girl has drunk the kool-aid. So this is not a criticism of your story, just hope Karla wakes up or something( doubt).
So yes this is a very interesting story. I will continue to read.
So yes this is a very interesting story. I will continue to read.
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Well I'm glad your enjoying it over all, if not every scene. Karla does have a slightly different life then most other Shrunken in this world. That might be effecting how she looks at some things currently.
And thank you for your input. It really helps keep me motivated.
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And thank you for your input. It really helps keep me motivated.
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I haven't had time to read for a while, but I finally caught up. Great stuff as always. I really liked chapter 30. I love seeing mean Karla. Seems like she really needs Josie there to stop her from going too far.
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I do tend to use Josie as her good side. Not that Josie can't be naughty herself sometimes. Just less cruel. Hearing from people really helps. Glad your enjoying. I hope I can keep entertaining you.
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Great chapter. Karla realizes how lucky she is and that a little change in the situation can turn her back into the little sex toy pushed to the limits she was picked for.