OK guys, here is the other story that I mentioned. Same set up as the shrinking stripper-only with a wife and mother this time. Hope you enjoy it and-as with all of the stories I post here-any suggestions for improvements will always be welcomed by me.
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Laura The Slowly Shrinking Mother
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Laura The Slowly Shrinking Mother
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Syndrea
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Re: Laura The Slowly Shrinking Mother
Daughter's name changes from Lily to Emily mid-story, and back to Lily, same with Jason becoming John.. Their ages seem to be randomly changing as well
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Re: Laura The Slowly Shrinking Mother
Apologies for the delay. I've uploaded the corrected version, and I think I was able to remove all the inconsistencies. If you find any more, could you please upload a copy with the errors highlighted? Thank you in advance.