The Tourists: Another Guest

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[Ghostwriter44]

Holy shit, I wasn’t expecting this, especially this fast I’m forever grateful! I’ll read it later today. Thank you!!

[HHunter1]

I had been wanting to write a little darker story along with my Karla narrative for awhile. I think your request just pushed me into action. Working on a second chapter.
There was another guy working on a story about another guest on the ship. I'm not sure if he's on this site or not. I think life has thrown a wrench in his writing gears at the moment. But hopefully he'll share his characters with everyone sometime. It is a world I am willing to share if a person don't mind me playing head editor to keep the narratives from becoming a jumbled mess.

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[Ghostwriter44]

Sorry for the late reply! But yes! I’m very VERY much enjoying this story! Not sure if anyone else is (hopefully they are) but I am definitely anxiously waiting for more chapters if you so choose to write more

[SciFiCrazy]

Definitely like the different take from the original. Getting to see the darker side of the companies employees. As shrunken are toys and property, it makes sense that some of them may not care as much about their pets as Michael does. So yes, I would like to see more as well.

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[frollo]

Both your stories are absolutely incredible ! I do like the “Another Guest “ a bit more because it seems to have more variety and naughty potential . The full grown playing with the shrunken , and using both genders big and small in the plot . It’s just full of delightful , devious and humiliating plays.

I think when couples are involved it adds to the depths, and even psychological layering . Jealousy , cheating , love , deception , suppressed desires , discovery and couples bondage , watching etc .

Both are brilliant in either case .
Thank you for sharing it here !!

Reddrop7

[HHunter1]

Thanks, I'm glad your enjoying both stories.

Though I base both with the idea that Shrunken are no long people but creatures to be enjoyed. The basic difference I have between them is with Micheal and company, they look at them like pets. While Trevor and the people he's fallen in with look at them like toys. Pet you take care if while a toy you can replace.

Yes both play with them to get off. But it's not the same connection. Trevor has a favorite catch, but he only talks to her to command or mock. Shapely would never become like Karla is to her Micheal. If Trevor had caught Karla, she wouldn't get the treatment she does with the Millers.

People wanted a story based on the type of people Karla kept warning Micheal's other Shrunken are out there. And that is what I am trying to provide. Hopefully expanding what the Company is like beyond the first bubble I started with.

If you have any questions feel free to ask. I will try to avoid spoilers. But would be happy to try to answer any general or world questions. I have found my creativity feeds off of comments.

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[Underscore]

Wow, that escalated quickly! Can't wait to read this full thing! So different from Mike and Karlas story and definitely different from how Alex and Rose are gonna go. Safe to say I'm intrigued!

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[HHunter1]

Yeah, someone requested a story focused on one of the type of guests Karla kept mentioning seeing. And I needed a bit of a break from that story. So Trevor was created. I'm getting to explore other parts and people of the Company with him. Looking forward to your take on a cruise guest.

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[Underscore]

Absolutely loving this! Its refreshing to see a more violent take in your world, the Shrunken reduced so low to not even have names just creatures with a means to an end. The love triangle battle surprisingly is really intriguing, logic says Crystal by all counts but my heart says Ci-Ci should win out but when it comes to your work, who knows! And I'm dying to find out what other surprises you have in store!!

-Underscore

[HHunter1]

I'm glad your enjoying. I was encouraged to write a different guest. It's nice to take a break from Karla's story.
Honesty I'm not sure where this will end up. But I am looking forward to sharing once I find out.

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[Underscore]

Hey, sorry to hear you're struggling through, I know the feeling. If you're needing to bounce some ideas, just hit me up on Discord. I'm off work for the easter weekend and plan to be working on my story anyway so I'll be able help out if needed. If not, well I can't wait for the next chapter. Loving this one so far!!

[HHunter1]

Hey, sorry to hear you're struggling through, I know the feeling. If you're needing to bounce some ideas, just hit me up on Discord. I'm off work for the easter weekend and plan to be working on my story anyway so I'll be able help out if needed. If not, well I can't wait for the next chapter. Loving this one so far!!

Thank you. Its not ideas I'm having trouble with as much as getting those ideas out of my head and typed into document. But I do appreciate the offer. Though, in a few chapters I might need that help. Looking forward to you next chapter too.

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[Ghostwriter44]

Sorry I suck at keeping up with replying on this story! Definitely loving it and am always anxiously awaiting the next chapter!